Seth's Plan: Part I

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Is this what you messaged me about? If it is, then I guess that I'd like Ice Bullet to be one of the heroes. See ya when you come back!

What my second post means is that you should post now. I would go first (I already did), then you, then whoever wants to go next, and then I'll go again. Once a fourth person joins, you just add them into the cycle, so it's you turn.

Oh ok. So.. what should I post? Oh, wait, does this count as my post? The idea is somewhat confusing to me...

why don't you look at other posts first. see how it works, you'd normally talk from a 3rd person point of view. Not like: "Hulk angry, Hulk SMASH!"
Like: "Jamie jumped into the ravine, praying for a soft landing."

Just put what you think your character would do if he was here. and include how your person got there. maybe you're a security guard for the museum, or you happened to be walking bye and saw me break in. maybe: anything. and when you get in a fight, remember to keep it realistic, don't dodge every punch, win every scuffle, make every attack hit. etc. you're only one person.

OOC: Is this the thread you were talking about? Cause Bella would love to be in this one, I'm sure. So, here goes everything

IC: Bella had been walking along the streets when she stopped at an old museum. Strangely, she felt something urging her to go inside. But the doors were locked and the museum was closed. But then she started walking around the perimeter, willing to find somebody to ease her suspicious feeling. She saw an open window and that's what made her angry. A thief was going to steal something, she knew. But who? And what? Bella jumped gracefully through the window and landed swiftly on her feet. She tiptoed around a corner and listened for a noise, a sign that somebody was still in here.

Ah.. Ok. I guess I'll start us up, then.

Sora was still Ice Bullet right now, and he was running around Jump City's alleys, trying to get the feel of the city. He still hadn't met many people, but from talking to passersby, he figured out a few things. For example, he found out that crimes are somewhat normal around here. He'd also discovered about a group of teenagers with superpowers were the ones to usually take care of any crimes. They were called the Teen Titans.

"Hm.. The Teen Titans.. They sound like a group I could meet. Maybe I might be able to join them.."
Ice Bullet's thinking was interrupted as he saw a girl about his age crawling into a side window of an ancient looking museum. Thinking fast, Ice quickly ran to the side of museum and, making sure the girl was inside and that nobody was looking, he creeped into the museum himself.

After getting inside, he looked to his left and saw the girl peering around a corner, and thankfully her back was to him. He silently moved to a corner where she shouldn't be able to see him, and turned to look to his right. That's when he saw him.

A boy about his age was standing on a canopy, staring at a rock in a glass case. And he looked bad. Bad bad. Ice tried to stifle a scream, but he accidentally let out a small noise.

"Muh!-" He quickly slapped his hand over his mouth, and accidentally made a small leap to his left, exposing himself to the girl he had forgotten about.

I want to stop you there.

It's a very well written post, and I can see you're both actually magnificent at this already. But I have to say. Th set up for the story comes from the person who originated the post. In this case, me. In my original post, I never said anything about assistants or a large scale heist, it's just me. Good Bella, and Kudos to both of you for your posts, but DragonEmerald, you just need to watch out for these little misunderstandings which can totally screw up a great thread. edit it and it'll be fine, but it's just me and Bella in the museum. Join us by all means, but don't change the plot.

Oh ok. I was just doing a small scale heist. It was just to, y'know, start it up and bring the heros on this together. Now, what should I edit?

Look at my original post, it's just me. just take it down to what there already is. you shouldn't add so much on when there wasn't anything related to it in the first place. come in, meet Bella, once you both came in, I'll post next, general rotation unless someone's taking a huge break. but remember, different members have different times, I live in New York so I'll be up differently than those in California or Europe.

Oh ok. I'll change that now.

Again, I'm sorry for posting unnecessarily on this while we wait for EmeraldD's post. But I want to clarify something first. Never RP for someone without taking a really intensive look at the character their RPing with at the moment. when you read some of their posts and you see how they operate, you can start to include them a little bit in your posts. Just make sure you never write an entire scene regardless of their input. It will almost always end badly. Please, tell me if the advice I'm giving is something you've heard before or just annoying and unhelpful; I will stop regardless of my opinions, I don't want to bother you with unnecessary information.

There I changed it

canace are you still here?