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Izzy Resident Caramel Anti-Christ
Posts : 1690 Join date : 2012-10-18 Age : 27
RPG character Name: Barbara Joan Gordon Code Name: Batgirl Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Yang (DONE) Thu Aug 21, 2014 12:28 pm | |
| OK the absurd nerf to the arm is done. But she's maintaining control of it when it detaches. Otherwise her controlling it while it's attached makes absolutely no sense. | |
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| Subject: Re: Yang (DONE) Thu Aug 21, 2014 2:50 pm | |
| You misunderstood me lol You can keep the 7.5 in terms of lifting power, but it cant take 7.5 to detach it.
And it's an organism that's attached to you, correct? if It's removed how would it make more sense to have control over it...?
There's nothing controlling it in that sense. I see nothing on the app that would even explain the control over the arm once it's detached. Since it's an organism I'll assume she'd be controlling it through voice command. If that's the case she can control it once removed as long as it can receive her commands.
Your main problem is your lack of explanation; for example you've stated it can produce sound, but failed to state how the sound doesn't harm her as well? I assume you're going for Cyborg's use? I suggest being more detailed. To even this out so you can get everything you want I suggest adding another weakness and then the nerf wouldn't be as strong. At the moment an arm that is only detachable with 7.5 tons of force when the girl utilizing it has super reflexes and can produce ear drum damaging sound is pretty much another power.
Not to mention when it is removed she maintains the same control...sorry there's no give and take there. Thus it gives her a total of 4 powers - when the limit is 3. |
| | | Izzy Resident Caramel Anti-Christ
Posts : 1690 Join date : 2012-10-18 Age : 27
RPG character Name: Barbara Joan Gordon Code Name: Batgirl Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Yang (DONE) Thu Aug 21, 2014 4:01 pm | |
| Yang has a psychic link with the arm, that's how she controls it at all.
And I'm trying to work this crap out dude. Tib tells me it's equipment after I had it set as a power. Then I used the stats he gave me for it. Then those need nerfed. Then the sound doesn't affect her because of durability, if you recheck the entire app like you claim that you do, because it's written. | |
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| Subject: Re: Yang (DONE) Thu Aug 21, 2014 4:53 pm | |
| Facepalm. Even if it doesnt cause her pain how can she hear at all when it's going off in such close proximity to her, how does it work? If you're still working it out then the app's not ready for re-approval.
If you're gonna be rude I'll deny your app. addition entirely....You have ONE MORE time.
I asked Tib of your stats he said to deny and permit what I see fit. Tib was right to tell you to switch it from powers to equipment. I'm telling you to nerf. it so it actually is equipment and not a power. Make sure all the things you're telling me are in the application.
So let me be clear, again get smart/sassy with me and arm will be denied. Im trying to give you advice - take it or leave it. |
| | | Izzy Resident Caramel Anti-Christ
Posts : 1690 Join date : 2012-10-18 Age : 27
RPG character Name: Barbara Joan Gordon Code Name: Batgirl Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Yang (DONE) Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:09 pm | |
| Edited again.
The issue with her hearing, if it worked that way (It has been reworked to the LRAD device used by government), is in her durability and what precisely Infrasound is. Infrasound and Sound are two very different things. Sound is produced through a vibration in the air, which our ears can then pick up and it is then decoded by the brain. That's what's letting me hear that I'm typing right now.
Infrasound however vibrates the air at a much higher or lower pitch, causing most humans to not even hear it. The affects however are very real. Yang's version is actually at a MUCH lower level than the government uses. Plug in your iPod and play some metal over an LRAD system and you can probably cause people's heads to explode over the next few miles because of how quickly the air around their heads is vibrating. This will cause nausea, motion sickness, hallucination, loss of consciousness, and finally death. In that order.
However as I said, Yang's is actually at a MUCH lower level. This is the setting that police use to break up rioters. I hope that explains exactly what her weapon is. | |
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| Subject: Re: Yang (DONE) Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:26 pm | |
| Good. APPROVED. Perfect. you need to change the arm weakness area (detachment) from 7.5 tons to 200 pressure like you stated on the equipment but other than that it's good to go. |
| | | Izzy Resident Caramel Anti-Christ
Posts : 1690 Join date : 2012-10-18 Age : 27
RPG character Name: Barbara Joan Gordon Code Name: Batgirl Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Yang (DONE) Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:28 pm | |
| Yup. Realized I forgot. All fixed. | |
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