Defluxit Iluminati (Review Pls)

OOC: So I havent done this in a while.  This is my first attempt at a reboot.  I know some of the spells arent specific but I havent really decided what exactly I wanted to do with them.  I wanted it to be more open ended so I can sort of create and get them approved as i thought of them in rp.


Full Name: Defluxit Iluminati
Nickname(s): The Light
Codename: Vergil
Alias(es): The Light
Age: 23
Classification: Demon/Angel Hybrid
Affiliation:  Neutral



Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Shimmering Blue Silver
Height:6’4”
Weight:195
Other Traits: While Defluxit has a very slender build his body is simply perfection in every physical manifest.  The muscles that cover his larger frame are lean and toned beyond reproach.  Even in a relaxed state every different group can be seen as if sculpted out of stone.  His skin shows a pure snow white and it’s complexion is without fault, imperfection or blemish.  The son of Sparda is masterful creation in his own right and has captivated many mortal eyes.  His body moves with an other worldly grace and fluidity of motion that draws attention to it.  His mere presence is intimidating and captivating at the same time.





Powers: Demonic Magic:  He is able to harness Demonic magic and bend it quite effectively to his desires.  Often times he manifests this power in the creation of bright blue swords, that seems to move, slash and thrust according to his will.  However, it can be manipulated to augment a weapon or temporarily increase his speed and strength.  On rare occasion he has even been able to form a fairly effect offensive spell.  However the more intricate the design the more time it takes him to gather and form the magical into the design of the spell.

Spell 1:  Demon Trigger:  Taking his demonic magic he unleashes his true form and by extension removes the bounds that limit his body.  In this form his speed and strength are increased by a 3 times and his healing factor as well.  The down sides is that after 4 post the form is dropped and Vergil if fatigued to the point of no combat actions for two posts.  Using this spell also uses all his magic abilities at one time meaning he can not peform magic the rest of the day.

Spell 2:  Dark Purification:  Focusing his magic internally he will quickly heal any impurties, cure poisons or remove most things considered a status effect.

Spel 3:  Summon Spiral swords.  This is his Bread and butter summoning blue swords or magic composition that form to his will.  At most he can create 10 swords with each cast.  From there he can direct them as he likes.

Demonic Speed/Reflexes:  This is where Defluxit’s true talents are shown.  His mind and body are in perfect harmony and as a result he can react instantly to almost any situation he perceives.  His demonic body allows him to move short distances in what seems like an instant giving the false impression of teleportation to normal humans.  However meta human's can see his movements as blurrs and the trick is seen as that, a trick.  That being said he still moves very quickly even amongst those with powers similar to his.  In close combat his speed is comparable to any warrior focused completely on speed and with that can match any swordsman's blows.  He also has the ability to use his speed to reflect and dodge most bullets with his sword depending on range and augmentation of the assault.

Demonic Strength:  Defluxit is far strong than normal humans but about the same as standard super heroes.  He can easily lift small cars and leap to the roof top of average sized buildings (4-6 Stories).

Skills: Master Swordsmanship:  He was raised to be a swordsman and has use it as his only weapon since birth.  Thus he has mastered his katana and has honed is technique to near perfection.  He will willingly take his blade into battle over any other weapon.  He has been shown to be talented and fast enough with the weapon to deflect bullets and even cut them when desired.


Weaknesses:Obsessed with the pursuit of Power
Honorable to a fault in battle.  He will not attack an unarmed combatant nor use firearms.

Holy magic and items meant to harm demons are particularly effective along with sacred weapons. If he is simply in the area of it he begins to grow dizzy and feel ill. The longer he is present the weaker he begins to feel. When used against him in combat the strike is much more effective sometimes causing him to burst into flames or have the effects of poison upon his body. Lastly under high amounts of such objects his demonic physiology may begin to melt as his very existence falls apart.

He is deficient in personal skills and by this fact makes few friends and many enemies

Equipment: O-katana Yamato it was a keepsake from his father. The blade was created in the dark forge of the underworld and is of a demonic magical quality that allows it to cut through almost anything easily along with channel his own magic within it.





Personality:  Defluxit is a very calm and calculated individual.  Every action or decision is made for a reason and with plan in mind. Nothing is random and even though his actions can be defined as chaotic if one was to see the whole design it would be obvious that all of them fit perfectly into his design.  Deflux also is very quiet and aloof in public ignoring those he believes to be his lesser and moving with purpose. However, he is not above casting harsh judgment upon mortals and cracking cynical jokes at others expense.


Strengths: Cold, methodical and calculated his plans and designs are often air tight and with little to be desired.  He is a proponent of honor and self-reliance.  He carries out his own tasks and conducts himself with a strong sense of honor in combat.  However, by the same token he does not view humans as creations worthy of feeling remorse over killing.  So he is more than willing to  cut down countless innocents to achieve his goals.


Interests/Habits: The collection of power to become the ultimate being in all existence.





Family Members: Unknown
Place of Origin: Unknown
Current City: Jump City
History:
The child of a union between a demon and a angel he was born into a world of strife and war.  Growing up in the conflict and constantly being drawn into the battle he grew to hate both sides.  Seeking to follow his father’s example and claim absolute power over both dominions he has set out to the world in search of absolute power.  Since then he has been following ancient scripture relating to demons and angles and their mystical weapons and artifacts in hopes of claiming them all for his ultimate goal.  Since then he transverses the human world as a nephalim hated by both angel and demon a like and feared by mortals.

Sample RP
The night was pitch black as the wind howled through the narrow alley ways of the city.  The moon showed bright overhead as the silver light danced across the roof tops.  One dark silhouette could be made out against the bright lunar shine.  His dark blue coat flapping in the wind behind him as sheath of his sword sat idly in his hand.  Virgil’s light blue gray eyes looked down into the darkness and scanned the near vacant streets.  Judging the area void of anyone worthy note Vergil stepped of the ledge of the five story building.  Crouching low as he landed his coat fluttered up around him as not a sound escaped the ground. Straitening his posture he seemed to vanish in thin air as he appeared in front of the closed museum.  Putting his hand on the door he pulled lightly as the reinforced steel frame broke free of its hinges and crashed loudly on the ground behind him.  The alarms immediately rang out as their piercing screams rang through the buildings.

Moving forward the small sound of crunching class could be felt under his light steps as he moved into the museum.  Wasting no time Vergil moved quickly the center of the building towards the new theological exhibit. Reaching the door to the room what stood before him was a pure titanium door reinforced with a rebar frame.  At that exact moment the squeal of wheels could be heard at the broken entrance as the screech of police radio’s could be heard.  Vergil turned back to the door.  It was just as expected the cops had arrived just on time.  Taking his left hand Vergil popped his sword open at the hilt with the flick of his thumb.  Immediately the door fell into pieces revealing the opening.  The pieces of the door sizzled with heat as steam rose from the cuts.  Taking his thumb and pushing the sword back into it place he moved in ward.  The loud thud of the heavy combat boots of the swat team rang behind him as they rushed to cover the building.  Vergil continued to move smoothly forward into the room, there sitting on pedestal surrounded in glass casing was the staff of the arch angel Gabriel.  Moving forward Vergil quickly removed the glass as he tossed it to the side.  A wry smile crossed his face as he reached out for it.  Just as his hand was about to wrap around the rod a shot rang out as a bulled whizzed past his ear.  Turning slowly Vergil placed his hand on the hilt of his sword as his face became cold and distant.

The Cops began to shout demands and others bark orders at the stranger.  Their guns trained carefully on the figure. Vergil was unconcerned with their mindless chatter and ill begotten authority.  After all they were but mere insects to him not worth the time to kill.  In an instant he disappeared coming into view behind the officers, staff in hand.  The moment seemed frozen in time as no one moved.  Then the wind came through ruffling Vergil’s hair as he turned slowly.  From behind him the faint clop of fleshing hitting tile could be heard as the guards fell into pieces behind him.  Their dark blood covered the floor and began to pool at the broken door way.  The only sound coming from the bodies was the cracking of the police radio as operators began to panic from the silence.  Vergil’s face remained stoic as he moved quickly from the museums.  “Power decides fate; your lives are meaningless because you lack the power to define your own destiny.”

Claimed by the devil in the pale moonlight.

Your application is done excellently. Let's go ahead and address my concerns.

Demonic Magic- Magic now works differently than it did before. Instead of coming up with spells on the fly you get three initial spells for having magic as a power, and then get access to three additional spells for each other power you don't have. In a word, I'm going to need you to clarify three spells. You can take out another power for three more.

Demonic Speed/Reflexes- I can't approve this. As a respected member of the site I trust your dignity and I trust you wouldn't abuse the power, but the fact is that unless the opponent has massively enhanced speed, this would arguably alloy you to always automatically hit with impunity. In addition you could dodge any and everything.

Ok i flushed out the spells. Now I wanted speed to be the primary focus. It's sort of Vergil's call sign. So what is the upper limit of how fast I could make him?

Corrected to blurs, humans seeing teleportation and more description over all on it.

Looking good so far, but we're actually gonna need a major weakness. Some way to keep Defluxit down and out.

Ok added weakness to holy magic, sacred weapons and heavenly artifacts.

Could you elaborate a bit on how effective they are? When Kyte gets hit by something holy or silver he bursts into flames. Does Defluxit do anything like that?

ok edited to fatigue, fire on hit or a poison like effect and vast amounts of any will cause his physical body to begin to degenerate and fall apart.

Splendid. Welcome to the site again.