Alpha (SAO)

Gamertag: Alpha
Real Name: Jared Wake
Sex: Male
Age: 18
Height: 6'2”
Weight: 177 lbs
Affiliation: Player (Undecided if solo or not, but currently unaffiliated with other players)
Nationality: British
Other: There isn't much difference between Jared and Alpha. Jared modeled his avatar directly on himself, if not a bit...taller.
Traits:
- Bright
- Focused
- Stoic
- Resilient
- Self-confident
Skills:
- Pole-arms
- Light metal equipment
- Parrying
- Cooking

Sword Arts:
- BlackSteel Crash: Jared brings his halberd far behind his head, almost touching the ground behind him or going below his feet if he is in the air, glowing white on the outer edge and black on the main part of the blade. He brings it down in front of him, gaining much momentum for a strong downward swing. Vulnerable to dodge.

- Hell's Fury: Jared's blade glows red, and he swings once, coming around in a spin, hitting twice, and then a third. Vulnerable to intercept.

Equipment/Items:
-Firewood
-Teleporting crystal
-Cutting knife
-Steel cooking pan


Personality:
Jared considers himself to be bright and intellectual, as do others. He can stay focused on a task, for as long as he needs to be, or can be. In the face of argument he holds a stoic viewpoint, but he has his breaking points. He's resilient against the odds as well as emotional strain, and above all, he has confidence in himself, that he can survive.

History:
Jared was born to two loving parents, Jason and Charlotte, in the English city of Taunton. They brought him home to their small flat, 45 Abermarle Road. They raised him as they were raised, to be studious, focused, and a good learner as well as teacher, skills he used in school and to teach his younger brother. However, his parents divorced when he was but eleven years old, and his father left him with his mother. Jared rarely visited his father.

The years went by and Jared found something amazing in the year 2022; Sword Art Online. He bought his NerveGear and went on his first full dive on the launch day; the day when he entered the world of Aincrad.. He too was horrified when the game master shut them in, reaching a rare moment of breaking. But he moved on. He got out of the Town of Beginnings. He will survive in this world.

Denied re-read rules.

I did so twice, what is missing?