In the "Identity" section - You have stated that she is 14 years old; however, this is 2013 and you have her being born in 1992, which would make her 21. One or the other needs to change. Either have her born in 1999, or have her be 21. Simple choice for you! Also, in that section, you can't have her start out being a Titan. The rules for joining have been significantly changed.
In the "Physical Description" please specify the unit of measure for height and weight. We have both Standard Measurement and Metric system users on the site and therefore it's important to know which you are using.
- With Precognition, I need to know how far into the future she can see.
- Fire and thunder are two separate powers and need their own power slot. With that I need to know how strong the two are. Answer some questions like, how hot is the fire? How big are the blasts? What kind of abilities can she perform? The more detailed the better. Without stated limits I will not approve this.
- Also, Flight is a power and needs to be put in this section. Along with the speeds she is capable of.
Which means your two abilities in the "Skills" section actually should go here. Since these need to be in powers.
- Torpedo Dash, Fire and Lava are not the same thing, and being able to manipulate something does not grant you immunity to it.
- Air Dive, no where on your profile do you list an ability to change into a hawk, please remove this reference.
Right now you don't have anything under "Strengths" please try and fill that section up and brag a little about her! What's she good at?
Because you need to put your current "Skills" into "Powers" find something to go here. You said something about acrobats and martial arts. Go into detail with those here.
In equipment you mention having a bag of feathers, what are these feathers for?
Fri May 17, 2024 7:01 am by 
Subject: Re: Katera(Rebooted) 
