Kaatisu Forrest

OOC:thougts, diagloge for kaatisu, kaatisu's father dialoge, minor characters for postname:kaatisu forrest
codename:half-breed
nickname:prince of lightning
alias:trent long
age:1200 (but looks 12 read origain)

birthday: 04/04/unknown

affiliation:hero

hair color:blond
eye color:gold eyes
height:4ft 9in dragon mode 5ft 10in
weight:100lb dragon mode 118lb

appearance: wears a red cloack around body and wears white armor with gold tendreals across it is skinny and broad sholders the armor is asorbed when kaatisu goes into dragon state and looks like goliath from gargoyals with blonde hair

dragon mode:



powers:lighting control: can create lightning around intire body and breath it too

dragon mode:becomes a half-dragon

semibullet proof:guns wont hurt him at all for eight post due to dragon skin

mode growth:only in dragon mode grows from 4ft 9in to 5ft 10in

flight: he can fly

less damage:takes less damage when fighting

weapons: weilds a double headed spear forged in dragon lightning makiing it indesructable and able to conduct lightning at anytime weather natural or majic
this spear holds his fathers spirt
likes:any thing midevil times flying training lighting storms and hunting and fishing and weapon making

dislikes:the destruction of nature but understands that it cant be helped being attacked with majic dragons that think he is worthless iron

strengths: hand to hand combat aeiral combat fighting with spear

weakness: anything of majic origin iron of any type and anyfourm besides what is in food guns after awhile unless using iron those hurt and if he was full dragon he be dead he is part human so he can be harmed by just plain fighting
skills:knowlage of what has been and spear fighting as well as fighting using anecnt battle rights


habits/quriks: tends to zap otheres when not meaning to turns anything into a magnet on a stromy day and reads all the time hunts and fisihs

personnality:calm and collected most of the time is very wise despite the look of his age is very reliable when he fights or does anything he gives 110% kaatisu oberves situations before he acts many underestame him till he fights


family:all dead(father spirt is in spear
origin:was born in a small villiage
history:his mother rasied him alone till his father came and got them he had been hiding from the kings men they wanted all dragons dead and he didnt want them to hurt his family they rasied him in the ways of the world teaching him to hunt fish and read his mother died for old age around 70 his father died at the age of 3000 but had made a spear for his son whith his lightning breath which fused his spirt with the spear after he left the cave to find the world completely changed and what was onece was a small village had turned into jump city as he walked around he saw a couple of villans robbing a bank sensing that they where evil he stopped them thus he became a hero

rp sample: kaatisu sat rembering he was just a youg boy of 50 about 5 in human tearms. watching on a hill as a battle was being fought and shook his head humans wasted their lives fighting over pitiful things such as land. He begain to head down the hill towards the battle changing as he went to his dargon fourm. He would give them a reason to fight he thought unslinging the spear that his father had made him. Kaatisu took to the air and sent a blast of lighting from his mouth and heard the screams from the feild. "Dragon!" some of the men shouted kaatisu just smiled to himself and dived making him a lighting meteior and struck one of the kings with his spear the fool crumbled suddenly the army of the dead king went into chaos kaatisu took to the air again as he thought pathtic you kill the leader of a army and all is lost he swoops down yet again this time planing on scaring the othere king this one was prepared and rasied his sheild just in time kaatisu fliped over the king and struck at the mans horse which spooked it causing the man to be bucked off. he walks over to the man and says 'you are lucky i dont kill you are a good king so i shall let you live but if you do anything wrong you will bring down apon your people the wrath of a dragon".

He then takes off leaving the two armies in complete confusion when he landed at the mouth of the cave he heared his father shout in a mighty roar "KAATISU! how many times do i have to tell you leave the armies of man to their squablings just because you are part human does not mean you need to act like one excluding your mother a gem among filith " kaatisu just smiled he knew he was in for it as he walked into the cave.

opening his eyes kaatisu got up from where he was sitting and took flight it was time to go home he thought
END SAMPLE

Welcome to the forum! Simca or Emblem will be the ones who approve your app. once it's finished and though I know it's a work in progress. Right off the bat I'd revise the power part because the only magic REALLY hurting him part, probably won't fly. Since many users here don't have access to magic and fighting him will be pretty much impossible unless we have super strength or a large gun apparently.

Like I said though, you're not done and will probably revise this. I just figured I'd suggest some stuff to help with approval.

will some one check this please

Well... I'm gonna need a better RP Sample, definitely. Use paragraphing and although it isn't compulsory its suggested you use different colors for your dialogues so they're easier to read.

And on powers, I can't really understand where one ends and another begins. Please could you separate them out under different headings or at least paragraph them?