Terra's Fall

I'm in the progress of writing something, that I am posting on another site, and they seem to like it. Especially the super perverted admin. So here's the preview that I had posted on that site.

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Lucas's sword dropped from his fingertips. His warriors, his loyal warriors, have betrayed him. They are here on Terra, they are here in the skies, they are here in orbit bombing his very cities. He looked at the traitor. The mask covered his face. Lucas noticed something odd. Behind the traitor.
Rockets.
...Rockets? Terra's surface was decimated, the entire military crushed. Surely they would have destroyed missiles as well. But then Lucas noticed. They were not rockets. They were devils rising up from the fallen Earth, Devils and Angels forced to work together to fight back a stronger force. Suddenly the ground began to shake, the very Earth split in two, revealing rusted iron. Lucas and the traitor was afraid.
A great roaring came up from the large hole, smoke came up and a red glow appeared. The Angel slowly arose, the stalwart defenders of Terra. He looked at the Angel with crying eyes. The stories were true, they were true, and they were rising right before his eyes. The Angel looked at him with bright green eyes and stopped its ascent.
The traitor ran off in terror, and the Angel landed in front of Lucas. The Angel knelled and offered its hand. The Angel was a giant being of metal and magic that not even the legendary libraries of Jorath had recorded. The Angel offered its hand to him. And Lucas took it. His injuries healed, his stamina regained. He looked at the mighty angel in front of him. It's midsection had opened up revealing a white orb. The angel nodded at him, knowing that Lucas was thinking. Lucas crawled into the white orb. He suddenly could see everything. Everything the Angel saw. A list of armaments appeared on the right side of his vision, and many other things he did not understand.
"I am Forge. And I am now your Angel." A deep booming voice said.

~~~~~~Part 1~~~~~~~

Levitas Pango, the great lightning hammer, once used by the great hero Venris Canter.
The clanks of a hammer against metal could be heard. For several days these clanks echoed throughout the valley. The village of Venville, this is the great hero's home. Several warriors from that village went up to the mountain cave where the clanking was coming from. When the six armored men was about half-way, the clanking stopped. When they arrived at the cave mouth, there was a huge armored man, explorers. The armor was extremely large. It was painted green, and had several black lines, outlining major parts of the armor. The green knight wore a large armored shield strapped to his left forearm, he had a small heavy hammer on his right hand. He had a large backpack, which he stored survival items.
"I am Bejorn The Forgemaster. I am son of the hero Venris Canter. And I have arrived to retreive Levitas Pango from the vile orcs." Bejorn's voice boomed all across the valley.
"You fool! The Orcs now know you will be coming, they will be prepared!" One impaitent explorer growled.
"Let them be prepared. Only more to the slaughter." Bejorn said,
"Their leader weilds Levitas Pango!" The Impaitent Explorer said, becoming impaitent at the stupidity of Bejorn,
"All the more reason to retreive the great great hammer." Bejorn replied,
"You'll die!"
"Enough of the delays!" Bejorn roared, his small hammer burst into flames, everyone realized that the hammer was magical, just like Levitas Pango. A magical weapon was very rare to come across, only heroes, or great villains weilded it. Those who were not worthy often died trying to train with it, where the magical spirit within the weapon denied to give its power. The explorers became silent.
"I will go. Alone." Bejorn said, he walked towards the forbiddin areas, towards the Orc camp.

~~~~~~~~Part 2~~~~~~~~

Aria was quickly falling asleep in class, it was 3 o'clock. Five more minuites until she could go home. Aria was often discriminated, because of her brown hair color, when everyone else was blonde. She wore the uniform all other girls wore, high socks, a skirt, dress shirt, a tie, the usual. Aria had no friends, everyone made fun of her, often comparing her hair color to the color of human waste. The class bell rang and Aria's energy came back. She gathered her books and bag and quickly walked out of the room. Giving the others no time to make fun of her. In the suburban village, there was an unusually high crime rate, which the government did not care about.
Outside the school, a few gangsters snickered and plotted to rape another schoolgirl. Aria, being the first out, was chosen to be the unfortunate woman.
Aria quickly walked out of the suburbs and into a forest path, she lived on an isolated farm quite the distance away, with her sisters, brothers and father. The gangsters could barely contain their laughter,
"She's making this too easy for us." One grinned, "Lets go."
The four gangsters moved in on their prey. The first grabbed her, and the other three moved in...
Lucas a scream. He picked up his pace from a walk to a full blown sprint. The trees cleared and he saw four men and a woman. Lucas snarled,
"Rape. Disgusting." He quietly said, he stabbed the nearest gangster in the heart with his spear, the spear went straight through. To the gangsters, the spear had come out of nowhere. They dropped the girl and pulled out their daggers. They franticly looked around for their friend's killer, but all they saw was the spear, they did not see the person holding it. The sound of clashing medal was heard and a knight wearing armor, not very thick armor but no too thin, came out of the shadows, he had a shield and a thin sword. At that same time, the first gangster had just fallen to the floor. He stabbed the second gangster in the head, his blade was horizontal, Lucas blocked a stab from the third gangster with his shield. Lucas pulled his sword out of the head and spun around, smacking the side of his shield against the neck of the third gangster, breaking it. The fourth spat a hasty insult and ran in fear.
Lucas looked at the girl, her shirt was torn, but other then that, not much harm had come to her. She was crying, afraid, confused. Lucas walked over to his spear, the spear was missing its handle. There was a small slot as well, Lucas put his sword into the slot and the curved crossguards snapped to the spear, locking the sword in place. Lucas took the spear. Aria was still crying. Lucas put his spear on his back and took his bed sheets from his backpack. He offered it to Aria,
"Wrap it around you like a robe." Lucas said quickly, "We must move fast, I fear the one who ran will bring more enemies."
Aria took the robe, at first she didn't know whether to trust Lucas or not, but she took it awayways. She then darted to her house. Lucas followed her, but in his armor, he was slower then Aria. Yells and loud footsteps could be heard behind Lucas.
"This is bad! Baddies behind us, 16 I think!" Lucas yelled to Aria. Aria began to run faster. They began to see an open field, a house and a farm house not far off. Aria was a good distance away from Lucas. And she got to the house first, she slammed the door. Lucas saw this,
"Damn, I'm not getting in there anytime soon." He said, he chuckled a little and stopped in the middle of the field. He turned around and saw around 20 men running after him with swords and daggers. No place to use a spear and shield. He dropped them and took out his sword. He took an agressive stance and waited for the men to come.
Two gunshots rang out, and two gangsters fell, their bodies crumpled. Lucas quickly turned around to see Aria, in new clothing, and her father with rifles. They began their slow reload. To the west, a large green armored figure was running to Lucas. Lucas looked ahead of him, the 18 gangsters was quickly running towards him. He looked back at the green figure, he was quickly running towards Lucas as well.
"Oh shit, shit, shit, shit!" He cursed, he jumped out of the way. The green figure smashed into six gangsters, the green figure held a large shield and a hammer.
"Arise young knight! Today we defend the innocent!" He laughed.

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Very.......... interesting? I think that's the word. Not bad, but... interesting. Where did you come up with the idea?

Oh wow.
I didn't realize you replied.

Anyways, it was some random thing that came to mind while I was bored.

It's OK ^-^

Cool... Are you planning on expanding it?

I wrote a new chapter.
But I'm waiting to make all the char intros before posting them here. 8P

Oh, OK

Updateddddddddd.

And I've decided for a Fantasy/Sci-fi mix of a sort.