Cosmic Lover

Subject: Cosmic Lover Thu Sep 26, 2013 11:10 am

"It's life sweetheart glorious and wild!"
Cosmic Lover Ipxd2f

"I intend to live forever, or die trying!"
===IDENTITY===

Full Name:Sparatus Xeno Hierax
Nickname(s):Sparatic
Codename:Cosmic Lover
Alias(es):Muhammad Lee
Age:17
Classification:Half human Half Celestial
Affiliation:Chaotic Neutral

===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION===

Hair Color:Blonde
Eye Color:Jet Black
Height:6'3
Weight:190
Other Traits:

===POWERS===

Powers:Cosmic Teleportation:
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-Ergokinesis:

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The ability to manipulate kinetic energy. Users can convert one type of energy into another, store it within their bodies, and release it upon command. Some users can create objects from pure energy, or project it out in other forms such as constructs and even allow the user to fly. A user may be able to absorb ambient energy convert it into life-force and live solely off of that, especially in supremely hostile situations. This ability gives him a max flying speed of 80 mph which requires a flying start. He has a regular flying speed of 30mph and when charging energy for two posts then releasing it he can fly at speeds of 260 mph but will be exhausted upon arrival. His physical strength is also improved being able to lift small cars.

Energy Attacks:A list of abilities granted by Ergokinesis.

Concussion Beams: Release beams of solidified energy.
Energy Ball Projection: Create and launch spheres of energy.
Energy Bombs: Create bombs/explosions of energy.
Energy Breath: Discharge energy blasts from mouth.
Optic Blasts: Emit energy from one's eyes.
Constructs:Molding energy into materialized objects. Object have a max height and width of 30ft and can be swung or shot with a max speed of 40mph. The largest constructs have the same power as Energy bombs and the smaller ones follow the same rule of power as regular energy attacks. Can withstand small firearms for a minute or two.

Energy attacks are able to fling humans back a few feet with normal blasts. Charged attacks will break through Mahogany. Energy bombs create 10 meter explosions able to break solid concrete walls(requires one post before detonation). Max range for all attacks except concussion beams is 30ft. Long range concussion beam attacks require total concentration and has a max range of 50ft.

Energized Body:The user can absorb energy into their body and use in many ways, such as by converting it into physical strength or using it to power energy blasts or discharges as waves or orbs of energy. User is able to absorb energies that the user comes in contact with, such as Electrical energy, radiation, or heat energy. Can only absorb up to 300 degrees, 3000 volts, and 200 rads a second. Doing so doubles strength of all Ergo based attacks for one post.

Power Augmentation:
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Skills:The Most Interesting Man In The Cosmos.

Weaknesses:Devils dealer:Unable to refuse a good deal with anyone.

Racial Loathing:Weak against other Celestials (beings born in space) due to his half human origins his internal resonance if off. And other Celestials internal resonance disrupts his own causing him to become very weak.

Limited Absoption: Cosmic can only absorb 300 degrees, 3000 volts, and 200 rads a second safely. Anymore and he runs the risk of overload and painful death.

Limited Durability:Can take more punches than most humans but not much more.

Gauntlet Crutch:His Gauntlet is the key to most of his offensive powers without it he is much less combat effective.

Equipment:A streamlined outfit designed in a far away galaxy. A gauntlet on his right hand that allows him to focus his powers. Without this gauntlet he wouldn't be able to shape his constructs or focus his energy attacks into anything. THey would just be baseless waves of energy hitting a larger area then his energy attacks with less damage. The gauntlet operates of his own energy powering through it.

===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE===

Personality:Lover is a free spirit and a rebellious adolescence graced with super powers. This mix has proved volatile as he is reckless, arrogant, and mischevious. He does what he wants when he wants and to hell with the consequences. He can be rather random and scattered often acting upon half finished plans then abandoning them halfway through. There is a soft spot within him though. He does not enjoy killing and genuinely does not intend to harm anyone with his antics.

Strengths:His zest for life and resourcefulness.

Interests/Habits:Power, money, and meddling.

===PERSONAL BACKGROUND===

Family Members:None anyone on this planet would know.
Place of Origin:Deep Space
History:Born Sparatus Hierax in the middle of the vacuum of space by a powerful celestial. Embarrassed of her indecent ways and tainting of celestial divinity she sent the newborn to live amongst his father on a earth like planet. His father broken by losing his nigh perfect mother, neglected him. Brooding over his lost love was his life. As soon as Sparatus could he left the pathetic bastard to his squandering. He made a life in organized crime but left it as soon as he realized his powers potential. He then joined many teams of various affiliation running amok the galaxy. Finally he had burned one to many bridges and was forced to flee. Now he has happened upon Earth a primitive planet in his eyes. Just ripe for the pickings of adventure!
Sample rp:

Subject: Re: Cosmic Lover Thu Sep 26, 2013 11:17 am

claimed

Subject: Re: Cosmic Lover Thu Sep 26, 2013 11:40 am

Alright to start things off lets go to powers. Starting off you have teleportation with what looks like a limitless range, we're going to need to step that back quite a bit and get a clearly defined limit. Moving right along into Ergokinesis, you have that they can create objects of pure energy and project blasts and beams. I'll need to know how sturdy one of these objects is and how powerful the beams or blasts are.

Now comes the tricky parts. I can't see gravity manipulation tying into Ergokinesis. In addtion to the fact it's already very powerful and shouldn't get sub powers. Based on your description of Gravity manipulation I wouldn't approve this power anyway however, due to it's ability to be abused and god mode with it. Power augmentation falls into the same place, I don't see how it ties into the previous power.

Shapeshifting like this would be your three powers on it's own, for it to just be a power you'd be restricted to only a change in appearance and some very minor powers.

Now to skills, Being able to survive deep space and solar flares would be a power not a skin, and Mastery of martial arts is also a power.

Please make the appropriate edits and I will review your application again.

Subject: Re: Cosmic Lover Fri Sep 27, 2013 5:36 pm

Ok for my cosmic teleportation I set a range for battle and going around places hes never been before. But I think his ability to go anywhere hes been before is feasible. Also my character will never teleport back to the side of the galaxy he hails from since he would be a dead man. So as of right now the only place hes been is Go City.

I actually got all my Ergo powers from the super hero wiki but I swapped them out hope you like them. Oh and Energy Attacks isn't really a sub power just a list of my base powers so I can reference them at any point in the role play.

Now I have only one morph and got rid of my skills hopefully everything is squared away

Subject: Re: Cosmic Lover Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:18 am

Ok, so just noticed, an alias is like any secondary names like if you were to also go by the name John Smith. It's not where you would have a claim that its yours.

The range limit wasn't a request that was a point for getting this through teleportation is a very over powered ability. There are limits to how far you can travel. Whether it be 1 mile or 1000 miles, make sure you have a limit. Why is he able to go to Go City though, you don't mention anywhere that he has been there in the past.

I was aware that the energy attacks were not a sub power, that didn't change that they are still extremely powerful as written here. Thats the reason I said no sub powers off this. Especially since with this power your claiming access to immortality, flight, constructs, along with energy absorbtion and attacks, and increase your strength and speed.

Alright, scientifically speaking there is kinetic energy and then there are atoms, thats energy vs matter. The two are not related. You could shape energy into a form but it wouldn't be matter it would still be energy. Additionally you still haven't addressed the strength of these attacks. I'm not as concerned with what they are as opposed to how much force they have. I still need to know how tough and large the constructs are as well. I'll also need to know how fast your able to fly with this power. I'll especially need to know how far your attacks are able to extend how how large your explosions are. This is again in addition to how powerful they are.

For the dragon form I need to know how strong how fast. How hot the fire is and how far it can extend.

This suit in your equipment section what level of pressure can it withstand (pressure is measured in atmospheres). As far as the heat I'll need to know it's upper limit. for tear resistant wouldn't this make it more like armor, if not please explain how it's tear resistant and what it can stand up to.

Finally what does this gauntlet on his hand do, how does it focus his powers, can they be used without it?

Please make the appropriate edits and I will review this.

Subject: Re: Cosmic Lover Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:24 am

Hopefully everything is in order now

Subject: Re: Cosmic Lover Sat Sep 28, 2013 7:54 pm

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