little red ridinghood reboot 2nd corrections made

Full Name:Marry ann lenore
Nickname(s):red,mimi,
Codename:little red ridding hood
Alias(es):n/a
Age:15
Classification:insane magic human
Affiliation:villain




Hair Color:golden blond
Eye Color:shadowy grey when she is in control/crimson red when wolf has control
Height:5f
Weight:115lb
Other Traits:When in villan fourm has scyth strapped to her back



Powers:
big bad wolf: The big bad wolf is semi solid manefstion of Marry's imagenation and shadow magic this gives him a body of his own and allows him to become real and visable to the out side world that comes to life through her powers but still being part of marry's mind he can still control marry while being out of her mind. Depending on how much in control he is how he appears when marry is in control he does not exist in the outside world. When control slips he appears as a human with claw blades when he can get away with them showing. When he is in half way control he is a shadowy wolf and marry will start wearing her little red ridding hood coustom and carry her scythe and explosive apples when she can she does not where them till then or wolf has complete control. when wolf has complete control he will be come a werewolf. He commands Marry at all time till control is broken or he gives control back to marry who has no memory of what she has done under wolf's influence  He comes out out under stress physical harm to marry or when marry loses control of anger he has the hearing smell and aggression of a wolf.His claw blades are gone and are replaced with real claws that can cut through steel he can lift up a car with ease but can not lift a diesel with (so about 14,000 lb would be his limit just shy of the average semi truck which is anywhere from 15,000 to 20,000) he could stop it in it's tracks after being pushed back several feet. He also has the speed  of a werewolf as well about (70 mph at a dead run can sprint up to 15 min a light sprint would be 30 mph. Wolf can not die do to not truly being real how ever he can be temporary dispelled if he where to receive a fatal wound time varies but most time it would take a month. While wolf is made of magic it his attacks are purely physical though the wounds inflicted by him take longer to heal from his magic origin. Wolf can also store magic up from marry allowing him to have purely physical body however loses phasing ability the extange rate is  one week equals an hour max is two hours.



scyth master:she is a master of combat with a scyth she can swing it up to 90mph she was trained by her father after her shadow magic forumed into a scyth as a weapon meaing she will be most natural fighting with a scythe she can summon a scythe from magic however it wouldn't be as strong as if she where to use magic to take materal around her to make a scythe.

shadow bombs:Marry can use her shadow magic to recreate bombs that her mother taught her the basics of she is capable of blowing up a car with a single bomb however this is taxing on her and wolf so she only does twelve in the shape of apples her max is fourteen before needing to rest(3 post cool down peirod)


Skills:
cheerleader:Marry has grow up doing cheerleading since she was six at the local ymca till she was sent to Lincoln trail at ten.


gymnist:Marry has done gymnastics since she was six and has won several championships till she was sent to Lincoln trail  at age ten.



forging:can forge a scyth blade should her scyth get broken



Weaknesses:
they cannot stay in control of eachother:When someone does something to anger or cause extrem stress on Marry wolf will come out and if someone can get marry to fight wolfs control marry will lock wolf back with in her mind and will immedaitly give up if she is causing havoc or doing evil.


marry is good:Marry is a law abiding citiezen and does not want to be a villian but do to wolf is 



is human:Marry is human and has all weakness of a human



being knocked-out: if marry is knocked out it will stop wolf and give marry control again if wolf is in control



poor hand to hand combat:Marry is a poor fighter with out her scyth and explosives even with wolf in control



wolf is bound to marry: Wolf can not leave marry side for longer than two hours and to do so he has to store up on magic for several days





Equipment:scyth: Marry carrys a basic black scyth with spear tipped points if the scyth blade where to break









Personality:Marry is a kind sweet girl that is a bit shy around others she will tend to stay away from large crowds when she can. When she is under the influince of wolf she becomes mean when losing control of wolf. who loves destruction she will draw mirth from the pain of other when he is in control they will show no mercy around others when wolf is in control. Marry's greatest fear is that she will hurt one of her freinds when wolf has gained control and eventually  lose  herself to wolf and become a puppet to him. She loves the color red that is common to both wolf and Marry. Wolf dislikes to be locked within marry's mind and marry hates wolf getting out and taking control. Marry fear the woods and large forest due to it leading to the creation of wolf


Strengths:
:Marry is confedent in most things besides speaking to others she kind when in control she is kind, wolf is a viscouse fighter almost unstoppable unless they hurt Marry they are quite cunning and are exellent stratigist




Interests/Habits:reading, medetation, cheerleading, gymnastics, trying to find a way to make wolf good





Family Members::mark trueman lenore(dead), may shyan Lenore dead), minnie Lenore(grandmother dead), lora lefay(foster parent), Zane lefay(foster parnet
Place of Origin:jump city
Current City:jump city
History:
Marry was born to two loving parnets mark and may lenore her father was a shadow mage thanks to his father and his gift was pasted down to Marry.Her mother was an explosives expert and taught her daughter how to do it in theroy. She began to learn the basics of shadow magic at the age of 5 her father taught her how to use the scythe when her shadow magic made a scythe for a weapon along with apples that had the power levels of the explosives her mom had taught her. when she was ten the family was staying at her grandmothers cottage in the woods. One night they where attacked by of escaped outlaws her father protected them with his magic but got killed by the outlaws by a knife that got through his guard. Her mom and grandmother ran with her to a cave in the woods while she was in shock. three days later they where found by the group of outlaws who then killed her mother and and grandmother. When they where about to kill her the girls powers latched on to the most deadly creature in her shocked mind which happened to be a werewolf from a dark fairytale of little red ridding hood that her mother and father where reading to her and thus wolf was created and then killed the group. She spent the next three months wondering the large woods with wolf protecting her . When she was found she was sent to a unique mental facility for meta-humans called Lincoln trails due to wolf being a construct of her power and it nearly killing the people that found her. As time went by she was released and sent through foster care when she was adopted by Zane and Lora lefay freinds of her family who taught her how to forge. When Marry turned twelve wolf snapped due to being thought only to be a construct of Marry's mind to keep her safe in the woods by the doctors of Lincoln trails and convinced her that he was no longer needed. Which was true at first but he had become something more due to her powers keeping him constantly alive even in her mind her powers giving him life of his own. At age 14 was when he became destructive and evil taking over Marry any chance he could so that he would never be caged in her mind again. since then she has been in and out of Lincoln trails for adjustment of medication(wolf just staying in mind till they think the medications are working) and counseling to keep wolf locked away.
Sample RP
Marry sat on the slab of metal and mattress that was her bed in Lincoln trails . Her eyes close as she breathed slowly in and out meditating to keep wolf at bay he was angry at her she didn't know why but he had gone evil and had took her over a couple times sighing feeling him going back to sleep she opened her eyes and looked at her room that was lit up by the light of a full moon. The room was spartan like there was only the bed a table to eat at or study two chairs one for her therapist that came to see her every week to discuss her problem with wolf a toilet next to that was a sink with a mirror above it, a coffee cup for water and another cup for her hairbrush toothbrush and toothpaste. Sighing again she got up and turned on the cold water and splashed water on her face when she heard a dark laugh it was his laugh turning and looking all around her trying to spot wolf but didn't see him till she looked back into the mirror  He was in his human forum letting a gruesome smile grace his face as he said,"looking for me little red." she glared at wolf  with tearful eyes and said, "Why wolf why are you causing me to do cruel and evil things people?" Once again laughing wolf said, "Why red the answer is simple they told you to lock me away that I was nothing that I was no longer needed and you listened to them you caged me within you mind and left me there I begged you to let me out but you ignored me and now your all going to pay you most of all little red ridding hood." Marry took a couple steps back as wolf walked out of the mirror becoming his full wolf forum as she clutched her head as she sunk to her knees  her eyes squeezed shut fighting him trying to keep him from having control. When her eyes opened her eyes they where now a crimson red. standing up Marry looked to wolf with a smile and said, "So my big bad wolf how are we going to leave this cell?" Wolf smiled before saying, "like this red" he then walked through the metal door for several minutes after that there where screams and a couple gun shots and before everything was silence once more. Marry then hear the sound of the door being unlocked and wolf opening the door.

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First of all, the problems that are hardest to fix is that she is too young to be in Arkham, they typically don't take metahumans and if she were older they don't tend to just 'release' you from Arkham.

Full no on the bombs, they can take out maybe cars and keep their current limit.

Wolves don't have special reflexes.

His strength needs a max, I think you meant diesel.

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Take out the skyscraper thing, it gives no reference to how powerful a single bomb is.

Can she make her scythe out of nothing if its magic? You still have a bit about Arkham in skills.

Under classification you're supposed to put what she is, in this case it'd be magic human not homo magi though.

corrects made