Wrath, the Acrimonious

Made edits to equipment and powers.

Don't feel like finding a sticker.

Approved.

Claimed. Expect review soon. Or else.

For ease of reading I have converted the following ap review into a Dos and Don'ts segment:


Do address the following.
Don't question my methods.

Do lose the option of Kyte's own anger applying to his Anger Empowerment.
Don't sweat it, there will surely be many other sources of anger he can gain power from.

Do add a radius for his Anger Empowerment ability.
Don't waste time choosing between metric and imperial units, their war is eternal.

Do include at least two 'achievable' ways of killing Kyte for good.
Don't listen to your paranoia tell you that these susceptibilities will appear in every thread (They will! They will! They won't! They won't!).

Do please tone down either your Anger Immunity or your Resurrection in some way.
(I) Don't think that the abilities balance out evenly as they are.

Do give him more weaknesses.
Don't, erm, not give him more weaknesses. (This is hard, okay?)

Do get rid of Sekaikui's ability to change the weight of things it strikes.
Don't forget weapons with abilities are weighed against the power slot also.

Do elaborate on what Kyte's current 'magical' abilities are.
Don't put that information anywhere except in your paragraph about Nth Metal. (If you do we will find it and we will destroy it.)

Do outline what benefits this Nth Metal nugget grants Kyte when in use.
Don't confuse it with the benefits of a chicken nugget.

Do take this opportunity to clean up the excess coding littering your ap.
Don't go overboard and break out the hoover/dust cloth/portable dry cleaners.

Do consider putting all non-essential pictures in spoiler boxes.
Dont forget to add an apostrophe to the word 'don't'.

Do reply when you have made these changes.
Don't be afraid to PM me if you have concerns.

I have made the requested edits.

Since we've worked out a way to keep Sekaikui we now need more description on its ability. How long does an object's weight stay doubled? And can an object whose weight has already been doubled be doubled again? I would advise no to the second one. This is because having the power to infinitely add density to an object would get out of control very fast.

As for the weakness you've added, I'm going to have to request a different one. The weakness you've gone with is basically saying that Liam Neeson in Taken was weakened by the kidnap of his daughter. Evidently he was not. Because he went on to defeat the terrorists. If, when faced with his daughter's kidnap, Liam Neeson had not dare oppose the hostage takers out of fear - that would be a weakness. What you've described here is just a way to pee off Kyte that doesn't hinder him any way more than it would hinder a regular person.

So yes, a better weakness please.

Unfortunately your suspicions of Sekaikui being able to double weight multiple times was spot-on.

Fortunately the changes would only last as long as the ability is activated.

If it means anything, anti-magic and Nth metal also negate Sekaikui's ability.

Your request for a better weakness has been fulfilled. I hope it's good enough.

Aww. I was going to lengthen this ap review until April 1st where I could then shout "APRIL FOOLS" and deny it. But everything is sufficiently addressed.

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NOTEWORTHY EDITS

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PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Kyte no longer has a "human" form, it is hereby referred to as the "sealed" form.

POWERS: Physiology has been changed to "Sinful Physiology". I removed Kyte's power of flight. I have edited and added more martial arts. I have also edited his Aspect of Sin power to make it a lot less intimidating. You're welcome.

WEAKNESSES: Edited out the weakness to iron.

EQUIPMENT: Removed nth metal. Added a lot.

Willing to remove Lucifer and some other equipment if this bails.

Yeah, just wanted Lucifer for cool factor tbh. Removed it now.

I'm glad you asked, young lady! R.I.P. rounds are a new kind of hollow point ammunition recently reaching shelves in gun shops near you! Dubbed the last round you'll ever need, this is the hollow point casing.



And this is what an R.I.P. round looks like after it's been shot into ballistics gel.



EDIT: While removing Lucifer I noticed that I mentioned an "established striking force resistance" for Gilgamesh but never listed it. I have fixed this, and that limit is 2 tons. I don't think this will be much of a problem but I am of course open to nipping that.

Here's what I did. I looked at your pictures. Bodacious, dude! Skipped a bit of text in the middle. Then looked at your signature. Totally radical! Your app probably meets all requirements.

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