Isabella Kline

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Okay, so here goes

- I think you need to go into a bit more detail about her being at 'Peak Human Level' when it comes to her physical conditioning. Just to give a good idea of how strong/fast etc. she is.

- Hormone Manipulation; you need to say what someone may do if caught by this, how they might act towards her etc.

- Change 'Expert Swords(wo)man' to 'Experienced Swords(wo)man' since you clearly stated she is not a master (If she was, it would count towards the number of powers she has).

- You can probably put Martial Arts and Swords(wo)man under 'Skills' rather than 'Powers'. Since she doesn't appear to be a master/expert in either

Also, emotion manipulation is a tricky power to roleplay with. You need to be sure to allow other people's characters to have a chance of being unaffected by the power; as it being a sure thing could possibly border on godmodding.

Other than that, I can't see any problems. Make the changes and I'll be happy to approve the character :mdance:

Edited.

And the only thing with the emotions is just that she controls what they swap over to. Honestly, they still act exactly as they normally would in that mindset.

And with her hormone manipulation power...well...she's hot. The only character that comes to mind who would have issues with that is Hotwire. lol

Looks good to me

Edited with Jaks approval for stuff

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