Viper

And that is why I should not try coding on my own. ^^U Sorry about that.




Full Name: Eris Vivian O' Kyle
Codename: Viper
Nickname(s): Snake, Fangs, Twinkletoes
Alias(es): Chaos
Age: 15
Birth date: June 22, 1995
Classification: Human
Affiliation: Good



Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Bright Green
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 169
Other: wears mainly black and green. Goggles are yellow and are on over her eyes most of the time.

===POWERS===

Powers: None. Uses snake-like gadjets to get the job/mission done. Master of stealth and highly athletic.

===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE===

Likes: snakes (vipers especially), Superchick, night time, the moon, the zoo, playing first person shooting games, and relaxing with friends.


Dislikes: toads, scream-o music, the afternoon, bullies, and villians


Strengths: being quiet, offering advise, picking up people when they're down, understanding people (even villians)

Weaknesses: can sometimes try to understand too much (like a villian's modus operandi) and get the mission squashed. Overprotective tendencies run deep in her too.


Skills: stealth, spotting something most people miss


Equipment: List of gadjets:
-goggles (can be used like Batman's in Arkham Asylum)
-snake bo staff
-viper darts (can be used to paralyze or put people to sleep. Depends on situation)
-climbing boots (has retractable spikes for climbing buildings)
-more to be later (invents from time to time)

Habits/Quirks: uses snake puns, hisses her s's sometimes to annoy people


Personality: somewhat flirty, caring, observative, dependable

===PERSONAL BACKGROUND===

Family: Mother (Unknown -- died while giving birth to Eris), Father (Brian Eric O'Kyle -- committed suicide during drunken depression), Little Sister (Dawn Hera O'Kyle -- half sister. Is now with foster family in Metropolis)
Place of Origin: a town somewhere in Florida. Their main income source are animals.
History: Viper's a victim of alcohol and drug abuse. Her father would beat her for no reason or sometimes a random reason. She stayed strong for her little half-sister, Dawn.

One day, Viper's good friend Blue saw a beating going down from a window and called the police. Once Viper saw that her half-sister was in good hands, she ran.


Sample RP
"Keep going," she told herself, "You're almost in the clear. Just get to the west and the cops'll give up."

The girl ran, watching for cops and their cars. Her goggles were lit, showing her every heat signature in her sight.

She whispered, "To freedom. To...justice."

ShadowWolf,

Overall it looks quite good, very daring of you to take a non-power superhero. Apart from the gadgets you use you might want to add some small things like: Highly athletic, master in stealth or whatever you would want to put in there to show how your hero works. These is just some advice, but it might help in RPing.

I'm ok with you inventing new gadgets every now and then but don't go overboard on them. Ás in, don't invent something new every time you don't know how to handle a certain situation. The batman inspired goggles are also fine by me, I liked the concept myself actually, just keep in mind that when other people are involved it might be best to communicate with them about your findings.

I also thing your history is a bit small, but I won't ask you to improve on it since that would only be using more words to explain something that's already clear right now. I do hope your actual RP's are a bit larger then your sample one, we have enough minimalistic posts already.

All in all, if you'd like to implement some of the things I mentioned be my guest, it would make me and probably the other mods very happy people. Please drop a reply here so I can either Approve you or evaluate the changes.

I'll put those in right away. Thank you. My actual RP's are longer than that, it's always hard for me to make a sample RP.

I was hoping for some more creative thinking and not just putting up the things I mentioned, but I'll spare you more nitpicking.

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