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| En'deros (Done, finally back.) | |
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En'daros Newbie
Posts : 8 Join date : 2015-07-03 Age : 28
| Subject: En'deros (Done, finally back.) Sun Aug 13, 2017 3:38 am | |
| "Your knives are gonna break if you keep hittin' me."En’Deros- Spoiler:
«««IDENTITY»»» Full Name: En'deros Nickname(s): En, Red, John Fixit Codename: Red Scar Age: 18 Race: Outsider - Alien Alignment: Chaotic Good «««PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION»»» Hair Color: Blonde? Eye Color: Orange Gender: Male Height: Variable (6'0" to 7'1") Weight: Variable (180 lbs to 400 lbs) Other Traits: As a member of the Deviant Kri'eel clan, En's skin is carries similar properties visible properties to that of metal (as in shiny/reflective). Giving it an unusual shine and glow as though he were radiating and energy. His eyes are also a luminescent orange. «««SKILL SET»»» PowersKri'eel Transformation - Born into the mess of an inhospitable, war-ravaged planet with an acidic atmosphere that would kill off what would be the weak of their newborn within the first few hours. The Kri'eel are a warrior race with skin made of rare, organic stone as though they had been carved from the very side of a mountain. A race that has torn apart their planet during times of war. The young Kri'eel warriors undergo a drastic transformation turning ordinary male and female Kri'eel into energy-manipulating warriors! Granting them access to specific inborn abilities. In rarer cases though, using up maybe up to 5% of the entire population, in En'deros case in particular, his transformation resulted in a Kri'eel who was originally gray or blue skin to become crimson red, as though their granite bodies had become that of a red metal or crystal. These few red warriors lack the necessary "Finesse" to attack or create energy attacks, but after undergoing a quick metamorphosis, their physical abilities increase dramatically at the expense of the ability to fly or make use of energy in the same way, the stress put upon their mind by the change altering their emotions to make them more unstable, or more peaceful. (( Writing up racial notes)) The metamorphosis in En's case causes a rapid buildup of an alien protein complex within his muscles, as well as an increase to a hormone in the thyroid gland that stimulates an increase of bone and muscle growth. The increase in height and weight changes between one form and the other, and with it comes a considerable increase to durability. This new physical state coming with it's own weaknesses as well, such as an increased daily calorie requirement (double that of a human male's average.), an inability to survive in cold environments without the proper equipment (something that would result in his body entering a state that is fairly close to hibernation), and a comically low resistance to alcoholic beverages and human narcotics (without the horrible side effects... Like skin and teeth loss.)
Last edited by En'daros on Thu Aug 17, 2017 12:28 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
| | | Energy Ωmega-class Metahuman
Posts : 5835 Join date : 2012-02-23 Age : 28 Location : My bedroom where I spend most my time cause I have no life XP
RPG character Name: Milicondras Gen- *is shot and a new person walks in clearing his throat* Miley..... Code Name: Fire Spitter (But that's only in other worlds.... for now 0 u 0) Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: En'deros (Done, finally back.) Tue Aug 15, 2017 1:15 pm | |
| All I really need from you is for you to list off a bit, in his durability, what all can efficiently hurt him. Other than that you made a very out standing app and I can't wait to pester you for threads to do together. | |
| | | En'daros Newbie
Posts : 8 Join date : 2015-07-03 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: En'deros (Done, finally back.) Wed Aug 16, 2017 2:06 am | |
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| | | Energy Ωmega-class Metahuman
Posts : 5835 Join date : 2012-02-23 Age : 28 Location : My bedroom where I spend most my time cause I have no life XP
RPG character Name: Milicondras Gen- *is shot and a new person walks in clearing his throat* Miley..... Code Name: Fire Spitter (But that's only in other worlds.... for now 0 u 0) Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: En'deros (Done, finally back.) Wed Aug 16, 2017 5:30 am | |
| Welcome aboard, once one more staff member approves you you'll be able to rp on the boards. | |
| | | Bloo The Overlord of Adorableness
Posts : 1982 Join date : 2013-05-29 Age : 30
RPG character Name: Emolga Code Name: Lightning Squirrel Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: En'deros (Done, finally back.) Thu Aug 17, 2017 9:17 am | |
| Hey! I love the app.
That said, I'm worried about the durability. Normally the 10 tons would be a fine limit, but the fact that the resistances to a number of non-physical attacks are there too I'm a little dubious. Normally every additional resistance takes a sub power slot of its own, which would mean heat, radiation, energy, telekinesis, and the other resistances would all be a slow of their own.
I suppose the change I suggest would be to either make it a 10 ton resistance to only pressure based attacks, or lower the tonage to something like 5 tons. This would add a lottle more counterplay. | |
| | | En'daros Newbie
Posts : 8 Join date : 2015-07-03 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: En'deros (Done, finally back.) Thu Aug 17, 2017 12:29 pm | |
| Okay i've made the changes. 5 tons is good enough. | |
| | | Bloo The Overlord of Adorableness
Posts : 1982 Join date : 2013-05-29 Age : 30
RPG character Name: Emolga Code Name: Lightning Squirrel Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: En'deros (Done, finally back.) Fri Aug 18, 2017 9:50 am | |
| Cool. Then you're good to go! | |
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