New song! Opinions and advice needed!

I'm drowning in the tears,
torn apart by my fears
You see me smiling,
but inside I'm dying

If I grew wings and flew away
left everyone dismayed
If I found a way to escape
my wounds left agape
I'd still be trapped
life force tapped
inside my mind
confined

I'm sick of crying,
tired of trying
Why can't you see
that it broke me

If I grew wings and flew away
left everyone dismayed
If I found a way to escape
my wounds left agape
I'd still be trapped
life force tapped
inside my mind
confined

I'm out of life
but too scared to pick up the knife
My heart left broken
by words never spoken

If I grew wings and flew away
left everyone dismayed
If I found a way to escape
my wounds left agape
I'd still be trapped
life force tapped
inside my mind
confined

How do you go on
when the your motivation is gone
How can I live
with no incentive

If I grew wings and flew away
left everyone dismayed
If I found a way to escape
my wounds left agape
I'd still be trapped
life force tapped
inside my mind
I'mconfined

Very deep.