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PostSubject: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 07, 2015 3:03 pm

Egill Loki Thorsson

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[i]We all want love and honor No one wants to pay the asking price[i]

===IDENTITY===


Full Name: Egill Loki Thorsson lovequest
Nickname(s): N/a
Codename: Ragnarok
Alias(es):Meigll Lockwood Thornson
Age: looks 18 is(6,000 years old earth years)
Classification: Norse  demigod
Affiliation: Lawful villian



===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION===


Hair Color: when not Ragnarok:brown when Ragnarok: white
Eye Color: Ragnarok :stormy grey when not Ragnarok: Ice blue
Gendermale
Height: 5ft 9in
Weight: 130lb
Other Traits:Has a wolfs head on a shield with swords crossing behind the shield as a tattoo over his heart this is a mark of a agent of odin



===POWERS===


Powers:
eye of sacrifice(plot only): The eye of sacrifice allows Egill to see how everything effects the outcome of Ragnarok. It also let's him see all possible outcomes of a situation but to use the eye he needs to foucs on the visions and thus makes this unusable in battle.  He can turn this on or off and when he does turn it on his right eye changes to hold the norse ruin of sacrifice in it where the pupil would be.

Elemental sword magic:
A master of sword magic he can channel the fire element through his swords though there is a three minute start up wait. He can use his magic up to two hours without rest

Fire: Can send fire through swords to launch a line of fire the length of a football field. can create a ball of flame that is the size of a volleyball  once it touches a object acts like a oil fire the flames get as hot as 538°C (1,000 °F) . He can also heat up the earth around him so hot that he can make magma armor this armor can withstand 600lbs of force.


swordmaster: Having trained with the true master Egill is a master of swordfighting his skill is so advanced that he has mastered the art of using six swords and  only the basic drawing and sheathing motions of sword fighting styles as a way to attack.  
As well as several different sword fighting styles.

Skills:
Forging: Egill can make and repair most weapons as long as he has the materials and a place to forge them.  

martail arts: He was taught by the  true master and knows enough  should he need it use it he is a red belt which means he is skilled enough that he is considered dangrous.

hovercycle driving:He has taught himself how to drive a motorcycle through out the years.

hovercycle repair:He can repair his hovercycle it is his hobby and helps keep his sanity.

Weaknesses:
Mortal: he May be part god but he is still part mortal and can die just as easy

getting ahold of the crystal around his neck: This is the source of all his powers with out it his powers are gone

odin's mark activating:there are times when egill actions can trigger Ragnarok when he isn't using his eye of sacrifice and there for can't see that and odin causes the mark to cause egill so much pain all he can do is barely run stumbling away or ending up unconscious.

without enchatned sword: only one sword holds the enchantment you take that sword he can't use his fire.

weak against water: water puts out fire even magic fire douse him in water he can't use fire for five minutes.

Equipment:
swords:The six swords he made at the grand master's these are made out of enchanted steel with a edge of nth metal that he melted down from his sword from Asgard each has a seires of ruins up and down them that relate to the element they control.


Hovercycle:A gift from his mother and father right before he was framed he used it to escape to earth and it can goe up to 200mph

Apple of immortality:These apples restore someone's youth and strength to their prime Egill's Father Loki sends him one when ever he needs one to keep him alive till Ragnarok so that they don't lose in this universe These appear in his hand when he is in a safe location where no one can take it from him so he can survive till Ragnarok.

hover cycle:

===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE===


Personality:Egill at first glaces seems to be cold and uncaring about those around him this is due to everything he has suffered and will suffer to save the nine realms while being condemned as a villain and monster. He is ruthless when challenged the only people he spares are those that he can not kill as it would doom the nine realms(everyone's characters that he can't kill without permission). He is loyal to those he calls shield brothers/sister and his family despite his father and sister thinking he is a traitor. As meigll he is able to have a normal life as much as possible and tries to be a normal upstanding citizen and a will do his best to help out people.

Strengths:
trickery: He is good at misdirection and causing others to believe him almost instantly he can lie while strapped to a lie detector and pass every time.

courage:He is brave and knows no fear even when all is against him.


Dedication: He is dedicated and will not be distracted from his goals.
 
Interests/Habits:
Reading: He is always reading and loves midgard literature the most.

sneaking in to asgard:when bored he will sneak back into asgard and give a report to his grandfather and see his mother or just have some fun by popping up in his sisters sight and leading her on a wild goose chase.

working on his hovercycle: Egill he loves to work on his hovercycle

===PERSONAL BACKGROUND===


Family Members: Thor( blood-father) Loki(Blood-Father) Odin(grandfather) Freya(grandmother) Alfhild(half-Sister daughter of thor), Nina  lovequest(Mother)
Place of Origin:Asgard
History:Long ago when odin gave up his eye to see the future to prevent Ragnarok. He never told the full ability of the eye it allowed him to see his every  decision as they where made through out the universes this lead to Egill being born and his half-sister as well. Thor fell in love with a mortal woman called Nina Lovequest and brought her to live on Asgard. Odin allowed this but at a cost to thor he must mix his and Nina's blood with Loki's as a experiment. Loki refused till he got what he wanted which was to control Asgard and was given half the kingdom to rule as long as he never turned against Asgard again. When their blood was mixed Egill was born through the magic in Thor's and Loki's blood. Eventaully Alfhild was born to Nina and thor a few years later. As the two grew up Thor favored Alfhild over Egill despite the protest of Nina and Loki. This drove a wedge between him and thor. It grew even worse when they started training as Egill had trouble with everything that was taught to him from magic to swordsmanship as the blades did not suit him and his magic needed always needed a catalyst for it to work.  

one day his grandfather called him to the throne room where he was told he must go to the well of sacrifice to learn of his destiny he odin saw it time to set his plan into action. It was there that egill started on his quest to save the nine realms and and came to the well of sacrifice where he was met by the norns who asked him what it is that he was looking for and said to make his family and most importantly his father thor proud. They warned him that the price for this was great and Egill did not care and said he would pay the price. This gave him the eye of sacrifice it showed him a attack that would happen and would doom asgard in the long run at the day of Ragnarok. He quickly made a plan and tricked the enemy into attacking the south gate instead of the west gate but this made him seem like a enemy of asgard as he had to lead the charge to get the enemy to trust him and led to him be captured by his father thor who cursed him by tieing his powers to a crystal and disowned him before thorwing him in the dungeon.

Odin and his blood father Loki came to him and explained to him that his grandfather and him knew the truth of his actions as she had sent a spy to the enemy who unfortunately died so he could not be cleared of the charges and odin knew due to his eye but could not free him due to the people of Asgard calling for Egill's head as they though he was the catalyst of Ragnarok.  They came up with a plan that they would help him escape to Midgard. Odin gave him his mark as a agent of odin and bound Tensa Moon to him to guide him in midgard. His mother brought him his hovercycle to the edge of the prison district where Egill was being held as she didn't believe he was guilty after odin told her Egill was innocent . Egill escaped but not without having to wound his sister where she told him that she would not rest till she killed him or he redeemed himself.

Using a unknown way to midgard he landed in the town at the the foot of what would one day be Chu-hui's mountain. It was there that he learned of the true master and spent a a 1,000 years trying to get past the guardians of the mountain as he knew nothing at hand to hand combat and his pride and anger. It wasn't till chu hui took the title of true master that he was able to get to the top he trained with the true master for five years and truly learned the price of what he asked at the well of sacrifice and reawoke the eye of sacrifice as it fell dormant after he became afraid to use it's power and finally improved on his swordsmanship by learning how to use his katanas to where he could even exceeded even his sister and tieing his magic to his swords he grew even stronger.  Once the vanishing happened Egill left the home of the true master and headed to jump city as he knew that is where he needed to be when Ragnarok happened.
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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeThu Jan 07, 2016 12:26 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeThu Jan 07, 2016 12:40 pm

Before I look through anything else, the moderators are working on a rule including no gods, since they are technically all powerful. You can make him into a demi god, but until then you cant get your app approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeThu Jan 07, 2016 4:01 pm

Alright! With that changed I can look at your powers.

Eye of Sacrifice:
So this is practically seeing into the future, but as rivers. You are just seeing all the possible outcomes, correct? This is the same kind of future seeing Sapphire has (my character). That being said, it can only be used for plot purposes. Seeing into the future is too dangerous for roleplaying, so having it only for plot, after being discussed by the group and such, is the way to handle it. You can either change this, or get rid of the power completely.

Sword Elements:
First question, does he have to have his sword to be able to use the power? Please clarify
How long can he stay using these elements?
You say the sword controls the element, but his body turns into the element? Does this mean his body catches on fire, turns into water etc.?

Fire:
How hot is the fire?
How big can the ball of fire be?

Water
Does he make the water, or does he need to be near water for this to work?
How cold is the ice?
How strong is the ice, how much force does it take to break the ice?

Earth
Rock armor and shields, how much damage can they take before breaking?

Wind
Alright.. Making wind turn razor sharp to cut diamonds? That doesn't really make sense at all. Doing this with the earth and ice makes more sense.
Instead you could make the air heavier or thinner, or even use it to push a certain amount of pounds of force.

Martial Arts
How good of a martial artist is he?

Swords:
What material is it made out of.

Tensa Moon:
This isn't really equipment... I suggest taking him out of your app and making him a supporting character with his own set of powers and such.

Hovercycle:
How fast can it go?
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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeMon Jan 11, 2016 7:16 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeMon Jan 11, 2016 7:27 pm

For all the elements, you're going to have to lower their strength. That's a crazy amount of strength! So please lower each one to make it more reasonable.

Alright last thing, you have a lot of strong powers. I'm asking you to add one or two more weaknesses to balance him out.
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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeMon Jan 18, 2016 4:02 pm

Done and I had no intention of having them any where near that strong on armor I got so wrapped up in trying to find a table for fire I forgot to make sure the weight in tons I also got rid of wind
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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeWed Jan 27, 2016 9:42 pm

I'm seeing a bit too many powers here. To be able to summon tidal waves as big as football fields and heat/cold to 1000F/110F are all full powers alone. I know you have the drawback of only being able to use one at a time, but it doesn't change that you're versatility is a bit too much.

I'm seeing a few options. Pick your favorite element and give it a buff to be a nice, complete power; or, you can give all three powers sizable debuffs to make them subpowers.
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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeMon Feb 01, 2016 12:47 am

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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeMon Feb 01, 2016 1:26 pm

Just some stuff to make the app make more sense.

Under elemental sword magic, you still have it written that he can control five elements. Could you edit that accordingly to drop the other elements?

You have a weakness where if he's disarmed he can't use his fire. The way that weakness is worded makes me think if he drops any one of his swords, he loses that power. I don't think that's what you're going for, but I could be wrong.

Under weaknesses you have "Weak to the opposite". If you're dropping the other elements, that weakness doesn't quite make sense. Can you edit it to be just about fire?
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PostSubject: Re: Egill Loki Thorson    Egill Loki Thorson  Icon_minitimeMon Feb 08, 2016 3:39 pm

Ready for another look sorry for the wait been extremely busy
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