Since I just finished up chapter 1, for those of you that have been reading it, I want some critiques, and some advice. What's your opinion on the chapter? Was it too long? Was it too short? Did it move too fast? Did it move too slow?
Also, give me constructive criticism. Doesn't help if you just say Kyte your story sucks Twilight was better blah blah blah...
So, I'm all ears, guys.