New Story i am wirting

Newbie Posts : 4 Join date : 2012-04-01

]Hello i am writing a Teen titans story who want there characters as the new teen titans generations.
Here is one of m own Characters beside the one i put up.

"I rise with the moon will you rise with the sun"said Iris Yuki
Iris Yuki
===IDENTITY===

Full Name: -Iris Yuki
Nickname(s): - moon Child
Codename: -Angle of the moon
Alias(es): -Moon Princess
Age: -Friday, December 21, 1994
Classification: - Angel/Human
Affiliation: -Good

Hair Color: -Sliver White Hair
Eye Color: - Golden Amber
Height: - 5'1
Weight: - 150lb
Other Traits: - She wears a long white dress all the time with Golden moons on it also she has golden shoes that she wears.

===POWERS===

Powers: - She can control the water and the earth

Earth when ever she is angry she can make massive Earthquake and volcanoes erupted also she can levitate Rocks and among other earth products.
Water she can control the ocean tides with the moon Also she more powerful at night time

Skills: - She was train in the martial arts training also Sword traing

Weaknesses: -She has less control of Earth then water also she needed to be near water at all times or else she will die

Equipment: - She carry a Twin swords that sharp it can cut through anything like a human flash.
Personality:
likes
Water
Plants
Sweets dishes
Aqua life
Animals
Cold Weather Like Spring,Fall,Winter
Dislike
Hot foods
Deserts
Hot Weather

Strengths: -She is smart,kind she is also shy around new people

Family Members: - Relation to characters mention in history/RP sample.
Place of Origin: - Where were they born?
Current City: - Jump City or Steel City, both?
History: - Get as close as you can to at least three paragraphs.

Interests/Habits: - Cooking,Swimming,gardening ,Reading watching the clouds.

Family Members: -She does not Remember her family at all
Place of Origin: - japan
Current City: - She travels from both city
History: - She was born in Japan Tokyo but when she was little she was in a boating accident that toke her entire family expect her she has no memory of the accident or her family for the mater. When she was wash up onshore of Jump City she stay with a friend who she will reveal later.
As she went to Steel City she found out about her powers that saved her life also she starts her hero care Angel of the moon b/c she rise with the moon there she also meet her rival a Fire Bender

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Subject: Re: New Story i am wirting Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:32 am

Personally I don't think the whole "she can make massive Earthquake and volcanoes erupted" will be allowed because that is just way too powerful. Also it would be nice to see a sample RP

Newbie Posts : 4 Join date : 2012-04-01

I try to get image but does not appear That a power She would have in the near Future

Subject: Re: New Story i am wirting Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:47 am

I doubt she'll ever be allowed that power on this site. Even though there's no volcanoes around to erupt having the ability to destroy the city when she gets angry is just a no no

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Her age can’t be “Friday, December 21, 1994.” That is her birthday.

Earth
How massive are these earthquakes that she can create? Can they destroy buildings? Rip the earth open? How much area do they cover?
What is the heaviest weight of rock that she can levitate? How fast can she throw this heaviest rock? How fast can she throw small and medium rocks?

Water
If she can control the ocean tides, does that mean she could change those tides from how they normally are? Doing so would cause massive chaos on a world-wide scale. Can she cause floods?
Can she bend water to her will and make it levitate in the air? If so, how much water is her maximum, and how fast can she move it?

Skills
What martial art was she trained in and how good is she at using it? How skilled is she at fighting with swords? How many years has she studied? Is she a novice? An expert? A master?

Weaknesses
This needs to be explained more. How weak is her earth control? Why does she need to be near water at all times? How close to water does she need to stay? How long can she last away from water?

Equipment
These swords cannot be allowed to cut through anything unless they are considered a main power. She can have normal swords, but they won’t be able to cut through steel or things harder. If you want this to change, you will need to sacrifice a power from above. Also, what kind of swords are these?

Current City
She can’t be in both. She must live in one city.

RP Sample
We need an RP sample. I would suggest at least 200 words.

Please make these changes and let me know when I should take another look at this character.

-Dar

Newbie Posts : 4 Join date : 2012-04-01

Thanks i would look at the Iris Yuki again until i get more ideas What do u mean by RP

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You are on an RP site. It stands for Role Playing, a text-based game in which players control characters and interact with other characters in RP threads. That is what we do here. Have you read the site rules? I think you would benefit from reading them.

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