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|Subject: Dage Virgil Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:09 pm|| |
"From my rotting body, flowers shall grow and I am in them and that is eternity."Dage Virgil===IDENTITY===Full Name:Dage Virgil
Alias(es):God of the Underworld
===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION===Hair Color:Soft flowing shadow that whatever it touches decay.
Eye Color:Endless void of darkness
Other Traits:Faces and arms of all kind try to come out of his shadow and capes, giving him a more demonic aura.
===POWERS===Powers:NecromancyHis body is so wicked that whatever he touches something it will slowly decay. Necromancy gives him traits of a common necromancer such as normal pace gliding, possession, but it will leave his body open so he likes to do it from a distance. undead summoning but it is mostly demons since dage does not like skeletoons and zombies,Then Necrotic Empowerment which means dage is strengthened by the deaths of others and sometimes fear as well as sin. Weakness:Not much weakness is known for this power, except those who have a strong spirital sheild that can withstand possesion.Also their is a limit on how much he can summon at once, for example he can create a swarm of tiny demons when he can only make one gaint demon. All demons have three comon weakness, a deadly blow to the head, fire and their hearts destroyed, sometimes when they have weapons they can be killed by that too since they are link to it.Necrotic Empowerment does not really do anything rather it is to refresh him, also he needs to be 50 meters within a dying person. Skills:Spell Casting: Dage have become so in tune with the dark arts that he doesn't need to chant or do a ritual for a spell.
Demonic Warlord: His reputation had been spread greatly throughout the planes. Making evil spirits worship and serve him.Weaknesses:~holy cross:It gives off a spirital force feild 10 meters in diameter that will greatly burn if id he touches it.
~Church:it acts the same as a holy cross but its 20 meters bigger.
~Innocence:Just because dage is a being of evil does not mean his body does not ward off emotions. for example is a lanturn or a telekinesis user insert emotions into his he will question himself and become confused and would stop attacking.
~Hope:Same as innocence
~Love:Same as innocence
~Peace:Same as innocenceEquipment:Cowl of the Dammed~ His cape holds limitless amount of corrupted souls, the cape acts like a black hole for souls . If a soul it suck in it is forever in pure agony.
===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE===Personality:He is deathly serious at all times and he only breaks a smile when he is mercilessly beating his opponents.He is also very impatient preferring to finish things quickly rather than show off . He only believes in one thing and that is strength and the only way to win his respect is to be stronger or a rival to his strength. He prefers to strike first ask questions later although he is by no means hot headed he is just extremely cold blooded and extremely smart as he learns her opponents attack patterns quickly and develops justu to remove their threat.
He is more cruel and ruthless then most villains as he can easily sacrifice his own minoins or comrads to gain his goal. He sees the world as a holding area for the souls yet to join the departed or consumed by the darkness. Thus he views the world as unimportant and fails to see any value in life, love, happiness or anything.Strengths:~spell casting
~long range fighting
~Old wisdomInterests/Habits:He has a habit on calling people a speack of dust or insect.
===PERSONAL BACKGROUND===Family Members:Father:Avalon Virgil
Mother:Lucy WinterPlace of Origin:LondonCurrent City:Jump CityHistory:~No one knows about his mortal life, not even dage himself~Sample RPSilence.........Soft, delicate silence that sings in the unremembered ally way. A man who not even forty stagger drunk into the ally way, his attire in tatters and black blotches all over his skin. Dage could not help the lustful buzz crawled through his body. The mans soul reeks of dirty sin that have long tainted him. Unknowingly to the man the night had became much darker. The man slump against the mold brick wall and passed out.
The shadows seem to coil around the pitiful body as dage glided forward. His hidden face split into a merciless smile as the ally became soaked in sinful blood. He did not scream for none will ever hear the scream of the forgotten. Dage went into the night, leaving behind the body that would be its hundreth meal for the rats.
Last edited by Dage on Wed Apr 25, 2012 4:32 am; edited 12 times in total
|Subject: Re: Dage Virgil Fri Feb 24, 2012 2:09 am|| |
|Subject: Re: Dage Virgil Tue Apr 24, 2012 4:47 am|| |
Ok i am done, sorry for the long wait and short, choppy Sample RP. I was bit in a hurry to get this done.
|Subject: Re: Dage Virgil Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:20 am|| |
I’ll be reviewing this application. This is a very cool character, but there are some things you’ll need to fix before he gets accepted. Let’s start out with his powers and weaknesses.
Let’s slow this down here. You have a lot of information under powers. Right now, you have too many powers. You are allowed a max of 4, which means that most of these will have to go. Also, those powers you do keep will need more explanation.
1. Able to induce pain, (How? How intense? From what distance? How could someone counter this?)
2. fear and hatred on mortal minds (Again, how? How intense? From what distance? Counter?)
3. and sometimes curse them such as blindness, sickness ect. (same questions as above.)
4. It also allows Dage can control flames of hell (all flames or just flames from hell? Can he generate flames or only control already lit fires? How much fire? Is it hotter than normal fire?)
5. and can even create his own demons. (How strong are these demons and what can they do? How many demons can he create and how much time does he need in-between? How do you get rid of the demons? Do they leave after a few hours?)
6. He can easily enter the spirit realm and enter other people dreams to bend them for his pleasure. (Same questions as 1, 2, and 3. Also, what happens to his body during this time?)
7. His body is so wicked that whatever he touches something it will slowly decay. (How do you stop this from spreading? Can anything prevent it?)
8. gliding, (how fast?)
9. possession, (same questions as 1, 2, and 3. What happens to his body during this time?)
10. undead summoning (what kind of undead? How strong are they? How many? How long do they last? How do you get rid of them?)
11. Necrotic Empowerment which means dage is strengthened by the deaths of others and sometimes fear as well as sin. (how close does he have to be to the dying people? When does fear/sin do this? How strong does it make him?)
Possible other power: “Dage is a being of pure darkness and evil.” Pure darkness. Does this mean he is immaterial? Or is it simply a matter of speech?
What do all of these weaknesses do to him when he is near them or touched by them?
Once you’ve fixed these problems, let me know and I shall give this character a second look.
|Subject: Re: Dage Virgil Wed Apr 25, 2012 4:37 am|| |
yea sorry about the power overload, i was confused since alot of powers can do many things. Although i am stuck on the undead summoning deal. because each demon is different like a fire demon can breath fire when a bug demon can squirt venom
|Subject: Re: Dage Virgil Wed Apr 25, 2012 8:52 am|| |
I suppose that decaying touch could be classified under Necrotic Empowerment, which would put you at 4 powers.
As for the demon summoning, just list the various types of demons he can summon or what different abilities they might have. Since they are all just variations of the same power, you can list probably 5 types of demons. Sound good? For example: fire, lightening, shadows, ect. Tell how strong they are and how much of their associated power they can spout. (Fire demons can't produce a limitless amount of fire, obviously). Also, The demons should have the weakness to holiness just as Dage does.
Add this in and I think we'll be good.
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