Annie the Angedemon

Annie with her Sun Staff and Demon Triton:

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Annie drawn by Ninjafox (which looks very cool)

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===IDENTITY===
Full Name: Annie (no second name because her parents kicked her out, doesn't want to remember them)

Codename: Winged Hope

Nickname(s):

Alias(es):

Age: 17

Birth date: 25th of August 1995

Classification: Angedemon (half angel, half demon)

Affiliation: Neuteral



===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION===

Hair Color: Dark brown with light brown streaks which goes down to the bottom of her spine

Eye Color: Left eye is coloured ash grey, right eye is coloured sky blue

Height: Average hight for her age

Weight: Average weight for her age

Other:


===POWERS===

Powers:

Her wings allow her to fly however high she wants as well as at normal flying speed, she can also ajust the size of her wings e.g. huge wings to make gusts of winds or defend herself and tiny wings to allow her walk down the streets without looking too different but on a normal basis she has medium sized wings.

Her angelic side allows her to create white orbs which can be used for illumination or quick attacks and use them at whatever size she wishes but they only do a normal amount of damage, it's more, the bigger the orb the larger the range but it deals the same damage to all foes, her angel staff allows her to do close combat and enhances her angelic powers, her angelic side also allows her to heal people but she is unable to heal herself during battle because she would need a chance to chant her spells and so would be unable to do that under attack but while in a team she would be able to act as a Cleric and heal her team mates although if she used it a lot the effect would become weaker and weaker, while fully posessed by Harmony she can heal deep injuries without leaving a scar as well as healing scars that people have obtained in the past, in this form she would be like a nurse, tending to injuries after battles.

Her demonic side allows her to make a more distructive dark orb which is black and can also grow to however big she wants but has the same disadvantage as her angelic side, it's strong enough to blow up a car but not a building, of it was concentrated into a small orb it would merely leave a hole in the building but even as a large orb it wouldn't be strong enough to destroy a building, merely break the windows and cause a dent, her triton enhances her demonic powers as well as also being used for close combat, her demonic side also allows her to grow sharp nails to scratch her enemies and leave deep injuries, when fully posessed by Ellenia she is able to use a move she calls 'Lucifer's Hand' where a huge red hand bursts out from under the ground, grabbing her enemy and lifting them high before throwing them into the ground. In her normal angedemon form she can also send waves of light and dark energy at her foes as well as having a high agility so able to easily dodge attacks. She can also change her outfit to whatever she wants, e.g. from her normal knee high dress to jeans and a t-shirt, whichever lets her fit-in more when walking around the city.

Also if she becomes very upset and angry she'll turn into her powered-up form which turns her grey eye to red and her blue eye to white, this increases her speed and agility a lot and gives her much stronger attacks as well as a power called 'sonic screams' where all 3 spirits scream extremely loudly which makes them mould into white noise and sends shockwaves through the air, but after this she tends to pass out, after she uses this form she tends to become very weak for a while and she never remembers anything from it.
===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE===

Likes: Ice cream, treats, ham pizza, teddy bears and other such plushies, flying around, daydreaming, being lazy.


Dislikes: Girly girl things, the colour pink, when the angelic and demonic spirits inside her argue.


Strengths: Her determined attitude, calm most of the time


Weaknesses: Her bad memory, lazyness, unable to socialise easily with strangers, if her wings become wet she can't fly, since her angel and demon staffs strengthen her abilities if something happened to them, e.g. thrown across the room she would have no close combat defence and would suddenly become weakened, also if she battles for a very very long time she will become weaker and weaker because of the stress of focusing while doing attacks as well as using both spirits to help her, while fully posessed by Harmony she will be weak against dark powers, while fully posessed by Ellenia she is weak against light powers both actually weaken her and revert her back to her normal strength, her orbs are about as powerful as Starfire's starbolts, any sort of thing can harm her just like an average human apart from the fact she has a tiny bit more resistance and bruises a little more less than an average human, she could be easily poisoned or injured just like any other human exept it would take a little more time for such things to actually start to hurt her to the point of causing actual pain, as her normal angedemon form she just has slightly enhanced agility and durability than normal humans, that's without her staffs, with her staffs she would have about a 40% increase in her strength, durability and agility


Skills: Hiding away from human eyes, looking after herself, resourceful


Equipment: A blue, curved sun staff made of heavenly blue coloured wood and a glowing orb in the curve along with a simple black 3 triangular spiked triton.

Habits/Quirks: Sometimes talks to herself when trying to talk to her inner spirits, at rare times she will yell out loud at the two, which tends to cause her embarrasment if there are others around her


Personality: Annie: A calm and collected teenage girl who is constantly conflicted between the two other spirits inside her but in general she is a friendly person who likes to be there for people who need help.

Harmony: A happy and cheery angel who loves to help those in need and cheer others up, she doesn't like getting involved in fights but if Annie runs into trouble she'll try her best to help.

Ellenia: A torn and emotional demon who tries to block out her feelings of sadness and loneliness of being thrown out of Hell, she also tends to argue with Harmony a lot which gives Annie a headache.


===PERSONAL BACKGROUND===

Family: Doesn't want to know them

Place of Origin: The outskirts of Jump City

Current City: Jump City

History: When just finishing primary school at around 13 years old, a demon named Ellenia had been thrown out of Hell for refusing to kill the demon she loved, finding Annie she then took over her body in hope of controlling her and causing general chaos but at the same time an angel named Harmony was visiting Earth to do some research for her painting hobby, having senced the posessed girl she felt that it was her duty to stop the girl from becoming evil, and so became Annie the angedemon, half angel, half demon, with 3 different personalities. Once her wings started to grow her parents kicked her out, saying she was a "freak" and other such nasty names, since then she's been living alone and wondering around with her inner spirits helping her survive, she tends to hide away from humans because she's afraid what would happen if they saw her.


If I need to edit it or add anything just let me know.

#1 You need a codename.

#2 You need to actually list what powers you have. Specifically what powers you have when the demon takes control and what powers you have when the Angel takes control. And although I can guess your wings can create gusts of wind and such I'd rather not have to guess...So ya actually tell me all your powers. Also what powers she has if both of them are being used at same time, if she can even use both entities at same time?

#3 Also you need to fill the habits and quirks, but that can be something simple like she will constantly have her other halfs bickering in her ear or something.

#4 welcome to the forum.

Done it, I think thats all what you asked right? And thank you ^^

Almost done. Now since I see excactly how powerful your char is I need weaknesses for her. because with all those abilities and being able to heal yourself you won't be defeated easily through normal means at all. Especially in your rage mode. And by weaknesses I mean some kryptonite type stuff where it does real damage to you. And can potentially stop your char. This can be crosses, white magic, people with super strength, other demons, etc.,, idc as long as they can stop her.

Is it ok if I not allow her to heal during battles? That's what I ment in the first place really, she doesn't have Wolverine superhealing, it's more like spells and stuff and so she would have to focus and concentrate so she can only heal herself if she actually gets a chance to, although she can act as the Cleric if she's in a team since she'd be able to use her spells then while her team mates fought.

That's fine. However, I'd still like some other weaknesses because if push came to shove should could just run away from the battle by flying up into the air, heal herself, and come back later or use her rage mode as a last resort. Basically I need some stuff that'll put her in real mortal danger. AKA she needs to be illegitimately defeatable to be approved for this site. However, taking her healing powers away in battle is a good start

Ok I'll try think up some weaknesses, but concidering she's part angel, part demon and also part human it's difficult to think of something that would weaken her.

Weaknesses: Magic would of course be more effective against your character since the demon and angel side of her are magical so if faced with someone who used black or white magic, it'd do extra damage/side effects to her sorta like how Conner Kent can't be around Kryptonite despite being half human. Just a suggestion.

Thanks for the help ^^ I think I've mainly sorted it out enough now but if not I'll kep your suggestion in mind.

For a better explanation, when Annie is possessed fully by Harmony, then black magic would be extra effective on her. When Ellenia is in control, then white magic would be more powerful on her. And when she's in in regular mode, then the two magics would work on the same level as they would on any of the other characters on here. As for your rage mode, I'm not really sure what I could suggest for that so I'll leave that to you. Again this is all a suggestion to help.

Yeah the Harmony mode and Ellenia mode weaknesses are good, and since the ranged ones arn't really that powerful anyway, about as powerful as Starfire's starbolts, they only increase in size for multiple enemies but deal the same damage to each.

Hopefully it's good enough now >.< but if not I'll keep trying.

Let see we have fatigue.

We have a weakness to dark and light magic/biblical stuff, which I assume affects her the way Crazy Moon described since you just said she's weak to it in your description but not how it actually affects her.

And finally we have that she can't fly when her wings are wet and her powers decrease should she loose her weapons. Plus she can't heal in battle.

Ya just add/cover these next few things for me and I think well have her approved.

What of the physical nature can harm her? Meaning if I shoot her with a gun what happens or if I poison her or if I'm a 400 pound body builder and kick her int he ribs. Basically I need to know her durability.

How powerful are her actual powers? For example those destructive spheres can they blow up a car? A building? Melt through steel? And any other powers that can harm or destory things. This is crucial to anyone who is trying not to god-mod in a fight with you and needs to decide if they're going to let your character hit them or not.

Finally I need a weakness for when she's not in her full modes and is just regularly half and half. I know it's hard coming up with weaknesses but when you make a powerful character it's harder to get approved because we cant just have you running around here being unstoppable.

(I know you said orbs and stuff are like Starfire, but I need you to add that to app as well. Plus how she's weak to good and dark stuff. Like if it makes her scream out in pain, or just freezes her in place, backs her away what? All that needs to be in app. too.)

There, I hope it's ok now x.x but if it's not I'll keep editing it till it is, and yeah I understand how you don't want people god-modding since it isn't fair to others, I'll keep trying my best until she's good enough to rp with, the thing is, I've never actualy used her in a forum rpg before, just little rpgs with my friends and in little short stories I've done so I haven't really been able to develop her fully, sorry about all this >.< .

And were done. Good Job. Welcome to the forum again, you should have posting privileges shortly.