Chris Mason (done)

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Full Name: Chris Mason
Nickname(s): N/A
Codename: Rage Demon
Alias(es):Rage Demon
Age: 16
Classification: modified human
Affiliation: Good





Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
GenderMale
Height: 5"6
Weight: 145 ibs
Other Traits: N/A





Powers: Transformation(sub): Chris has been possessed by a Rage Demon, which can seize control and physically transform him into a form similar to the Demon's natural form. When his negative emotions become too strong, this demon can take over his body and transform it. He will only transform back after his emotions have returned to normal. He can only use his powers when he is transformed.
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Superhuman strength: When the Rage Demon within takes control and transforms Chris' body into his semi-demonic form, he gains Super Human strength and is able to lift around 50 tons of weight. Though this level cannot be maintained for long without some source of rage to feed upon. This incredible strength extends to the Demon's legs allowing to leap up to 1/8 of a mile from a standing start.

Superhuman durability: When in his Demonic Form, Chris's body tissue are much denser then that of a normal human, endowing him with nigh-invulnerability allowing him to absorb enormous punishment without sustaining serious damage. The Demon can survive super human blows from other creatures as powerful as itself, withstand concentrated high caliber gunfire, and even powerful explosions. The most he pressure he has ever dealt with is 20 tons of weight while the max is 50. He is immune to fire alltogether, but shows no resistance to electricity or acid.

Hellfire Manipulation: As a Rage Demon, Chris' demonic possessor can generate and manipulate the flames of Hell. This mystical fire is magical in nature, and is extremely difficult to douse once it begins to burn. Much like the Demon's other powers, this Hellfire becomes stronger the more rage the demon has to consume. When sufficiently powered up, this Hellfire can burn at over 3000 degrees. When in combat the Demon can project these mystical flames in different types of ranged attacks, usually from his hands or mouth, and can even infuse his physical combat with blows augmented by Hellfire blasts. His ranged attacks go from simple fireballs, beams, vortexs, a bomb,  a wave of fire going in all directions, or even cause the ground to emit fire for a few seconds. The Demon has even shown some capability to create simple constructs from this fire, appearing similar to magma, and can create things like spikes, restraints, or even sheilds. His range attacks have a record of going out for 30-50 feet wide before vanishing.

Skills: N/A

Weaknesses:

Magic: Magic not only hurts him, but it can also separate it from Chris. Any magic user this can sense magical energy can sense the demon in him. The demon can be separated by a ritual after dealing a ton of damage to him.

Holy weapons: A hell spawns most common weakness. When he is hit by these kinds of weapons he is given third degree burns before any major damage.

Holy water: self explanatory

Water: Enough water can put of his flames and even make his fire power useless when he is covered in it making him unable to use hellfire for a period of time.


Equipment: Phone, comics, laptop, school stuff, Blue dr.dre headphones




Personality: Chris is just a typical teenager if you think about it. But he doesn't like to talk to most people like his classmates because they are very annoying and full of themselves. Like if he just stays at his deck and listens to his music, Chris would be hit in the head by some paper air plane which causes half the classroom to laugh. Which also leaves him pissed off. That's another thing Chris himself can't really take playful teasing very well and gets pissed from it.

A think to take note off is that he isn't very social. He usually stays silent and thinks while isolating himself. He also doesn't have much of a attention span for things he doesn't care about like school stuff. He also has trouble forming words to speak sometimes even if he can think about them. But at least he has some form of a sense of humor because he is usually laughing his ass off from a internet video.

Strengths:comics

Interests/Habits:comics, music, video games




Family Members: Jake Mason(father)(dead)
Donna Mason(mom)(Dead)
Carlos Mason(brother)(dead)
Daniel Mason(brother)(alive)

Place of Origin: Milford Connecticut

History: Chris was born on December 14 in Milford hospital. He was born to the married couple of Jake and Donna Mason. Jake wasn't a nice guy towards people and especially not to Jill or Chris. He also had two brothers. His first brother Carlos was the worst of the three as he lied his way from kindergarten to his current place in life. His second brother Daniel was extremely lasy. Around kindergarten he would usually see his dad a drunk mess on the couch and would even hear bits and pieces of his dad yelling at mom. It would continue for a few years, which would lead into middle school. During those few years not a lot has changed for him, but his mom left his father and him along his brothers before middle school even began. That only severed to anger Chris instead of sadden him. The experience of his mother's abandonment changed Chris a lot. He became more angery and more isolated from his family. In order to get more reasons to stay away from his house, Chris started getting after school tutoring even if he hated it. He even stood over his classmate's place during the night a few times a mouth for that reason alone. Other then his school life he didn't really have much of a social life at all. He usually locked himself in his room to read comics, watch funny internet videos or play a video game too ignore realty to his best ability. But no matter what he did there was always something there to snap him back. Like annoying ass classmates. But he got use to after years of having to deal with them since he spent almost everyday with them in the same room. During his high school life he got a job at a comic shop as a clerk. This was great for him for a number of reasons. He has a reason to get was from home, he loves comics and helping peop with them, and he can be lazy as they have slow days a lot. He pay was good as well which he used half for comics. He only worked on Fridays and weekends because of school. Towards the middle of his senior years things started to south for Chris. His boss was force to fire him because he needed to save money to keep the store. At home the never ending arguing between his older brother and his father drove him insane. This caused him to assault both of them as he left the house in a fit. At a cafe he was also pissed off over the fact that he was on the edge of failing out of his school. All these things and more pushed him over the limit until something snapped in him. He left the cafe in a hurry and down the alley as he burst into blue flames. He would have been dead, but instead he was transformed into a demon from a unknown cause. The next morning he woke up in a different all with no memory of last night. He soon discovered that a black monster rampaged Milford and destroyed most of downtown. The next thing he knew was a voice in his head telling him that he was the one who did the damage. The voice told him that he was a demon of rage who put himself on Chris because his rage was strong enough for it to be apart of Chris so it can run around the human plan. With several questions running in his head he left for home to figure this out. He got there only to get met by a enraged and drunk father that was still pissed about him punching him. He smacked him around a few times until Chris transformed once more and killed his dad then burnt down the house. After this he left the small town to make sure no one figured out it was him who destroyed most of the town. He used the money on him to get a ticket to a train to anywhere and hoped for the best.
Sample rp:

The dark alley was not only cold, but gross beyond a man's belief. One can not imagine why a homeless person would sleep in one of them so willingly. But it was all the young teen can use for now. He couldn't go home to Milford ever again. How long has it been since he left? A few days? A few weeks? Months?

He couldn't tell since he doesn't own a phone anymore. But it was a long time none the less. He didn't have much options open other then use whatever money he had left for food. Speaking of the devil there was a diner across the street.

He got up from the ground and would make his way over to it. At that moment a military convoy rolled up on him as soldiers came out of it. A few of them took him by the arms and dragge dhim into the large vehicle as he was handed cuffed to a pole.

"What the hell man let me go I have my rights."

He was soon met with the butt of a AK-47 to his face causing him to groan in pain.

"Shut the hell up and sit still."

One do the soliders told him with anger. Speaking of anger thenteen's was rising rapidly. He soon looked at the same solider as he put on a scowl.

"You really don't want this right now."

He was about to get hit was the A again, but the soil set was thrown back by a explosion of blue flames. Anyone was wasn't on fire would see a tall dark figure standing up with blue eyes. The monster would slam itself in the side of the vehicle causing it to tip over. The front of the vehicle would get thrown into a building as the same monster jumped out and fled to a random direction.

Why did they try to take him?

Bump

Claimed, in the name of the Silver King. Expect a reply soon.

Hi there, welcome to the site. You have a very cool character here, and I look forward to seeing him in action. There's a few things we need to get taken care of, here. Right now, Chris is too powerful for our site's balance. Don't be alarmed, you didn't do anything wrong. We just need to go through and tweak a few things before he will get approved. This is pretty common, so please don't feel disheartened. I've outlined some things that need to be addressed, added, or changed from the application. Once you've edited your app to address these, let me know. If you have any questions, feel free to ask in this thread, or send me a Private Message.

The Powers
Transformation: His transformation is fine. I'm just curious if he can use his powers in human form, or only when he's taken over and transformed. Also, what does his transformed demon-form look like?

His strength needs to be lowered. The absolute maximum he could ever lift should be 50 tons or less. If you want him to get stronger as his emotions are more intense, than you would want his strength to start lower. The higher that strength is, the more weaknesses we will need.

Durability needs to be more specific. How many tons of force is he able to withstand without breaking? If he has energy resistance, then the pure physical defense will need to be considerably lower. Depending on which elements he has resistance to, that might be anywhere from 5-15 tons.

Hellfire needs a little more information. Are his fire attacks limited to conjuring basic streams of fire and simple constructs, or can he do other things like make fireballs? Also, what is the maximum range for these fire attacks? Now 5000 degrees is pretty hot, considering steel melts at 2500 F. We can't have Chris shooting jets of fire that incinerate the guy behind the brick wall behind the firetruck. So his fire is going to have to be a little less intense. Of course, if somebody's just standing there, Chris should have no problem frying them. But unless he's smothering someone's shield, battle mech, or car for an extended period of time, he shouldn't be able to just melt everything.

Emotional Empowerment isn't stated to have any specific effects other than make his other powers better. The maxed-out limits (including when he's super angry) for each power can be built in to the powers themselves, so I'd suggest getting rid of Emotional Empowerment to stay within the 3 power limit. Think of it more as a power source than an actual power.

The Weaknesses
Emotional is not a weakness, since getting emotional is what gives him physical power. This section is for combative weaknesses, not personality flaws.

The same applies for Rampage. Turning into a nearly unstoppable monster and destroying everything in sight is not a weakness.

Magic can separate the demon from Chris? How? Would this be permanent if the demon was hurt with enough magic?

Holy Energy, Batman. Demons usually have a weakness to holy objects, weapons, and energy. It gives them burns, causes wounds that don't heal for a long time, or generally messes them up. Let's add some holy weakness in there, please.

Water is also a standard weakness of fire. More so than just "if you throw water on something he has burned down, it will put the fire out." Something along the lines of "he can't form or shoot fire when he's drenched with water" might be appropriate.

Bump

Let me know if you're going to make any extra changes based on what we talked about in the PM.

Done

Just a few more things to fine tune this.

We need a bit more explanation of what holy weapons and energy do to him. I'd recommend adding in that it gives him third degree burns.

Speaking of burns, can he be hurt by fire?

Assuming fire doesn't faze him, we need to be very clear on how someone would actually hurt this monster. Any other sort of non-physical damage: ice, laser, poison, electricity, acid, sleeping gas, and the like should all hurt him like they would a normal person.

Also, throw in the maximum amount of physical force that he can withstand without, you know, dying.

What you mean physical force I aside he can witstand a good 20 tons

It says the most pressure he has ever dealt with is 20 tons, not the most he could ever deal with.

In that case I put in 50

One approval down. One to go.

I read my horoscope. It said to approve this.

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