Classic (Done)

Subject: Classic (Done) Sat Sep 28, 2013 1:33 am

[size=25]===IDENTITY===

Full Name:Anthony Masters
Nickname(s):Ant or Tony
Codename:Classic
Alias(es):Doesn't know what it means.
Age:16
Classification:Amplified Human
Affiliation:Titan Hopeful

===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION===

Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Green normally and Maroonish when powered.
Height:6ft 2inches
Weight:200lbs
Other Traits:Glows a faint purple when powered up.

===POWERS===

Powers:
Super Strength:
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Super Speed:
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Regenerative Healing:
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Skills:Great leadership skills as well as a team player. Survivalist.

Weaknesses:Every full moon he loses all his powers(Death on this day is permanent) thanks to the goddess Selene's curse.

Equipment:Hercules Ring:This ancient ring is said to be worn by the most famous of Grecian heroes Hercules. This ring apparently imbued with the demi-gods powers has been taken by the young and impressionable Anthony Masters. This ring is the source of all his superhuman powers.

===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE===

Personality:Classic is a classic example of what happens to teenage boys when they have money, looks, and power. Hes the testosterone jacked jock straight from the movies. Hes selfish with a big chip on his shoulder, leaning a bit on the obnoxious side. He also has a strong sense of pride in his nation and a great sense of duty. He believes in protecting people from harm and self sacrifice despite his other short comings.

Strengths:Headstrong and so brave its stupid.

Interests/Habits:All American sports, fasts cars, and loose women.

===PERSONAL BACKGROUND===

Family Members:Mason and Jean Masterson
Place of Origin:Jump City
History:Anthony grew up in a suburban mansion just outside the main city spending his summers with his father in the wilderness learning how to survive. He attended prestigious private schools. Where he always excelled at athletics, his academics where weak but nothing a healthy donation couldn't fix. He went through life with no real struggle and had everything pretty much handed to him. His relationship with his father is shaky at best. He never lived up to his fathers expectations and is dismissed by the man on a daily basis. One day on his Junior year at Murakami highschool he went on a field trip to the Jump City museum. Anthony and two of his friends ditched the tour group and snuck into a back room holding crates of newly arrived artifacts. The adolescences proceeded to rummage through the scattered artifacts laughing and joking all the way. Eventually Anthony stumbled upon a beautiful and intricate ring. When no one was looking he slipped the ring on. The boys snuck out of the room and slinked back to their class where they were all promptly given detention. After detention Anthony stumbled upon a purse snatch in progress. He gave chase and caught up with the thief, however the assailant proved to be no push over he pulled a knife and stabbed young Anthony and wrestled him to the ground. Then in the heat of the moment the ring he stole flared brightly. And something in him changed he had a faint glow his school clothes were gone and he felt stronger than ever. He threw the criminal off high into the air caught him and knocked him out with one punch. H returned the purse to the startled but thankful woman and ran off mind thoroughly blown. When he reached the top of a hill on the outskirts of town a hologram of sorts beamed out of the ring. A image of a large, powerful, rugged looking man appeared before him. He explained the origins and powers of the ring to him and entrusted his legacy to the young man. Now a days Anthony just spends his time trying to balance his home life, school, and training his powers. He hopes to prove he can be a competent superhero and join up with his home town team the Teen Titans.
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Subject: Re: Classic (Done) Sat Sep 28, 2013 9:24 pm

Ready for review

Subject: Re: Classic (Done) Sun Sep 29, 2013 12:38 pm

claimed

Subject: Re: Classic (Done) Sun Sep 29, 2013 3:41 pm

Lets start with his personality, with his current personality it doesn't make much sense that he would want to be a hero. You say he is selfish but has a sense of duty ad self sacrifice...those can't coincide.

Secondly, in his history you have him spending a more than substantial amount of time with his dad but also have his dad being disappointed in him and dismissing him as a man, what?

You also have him just sneaking into the backo a museum filled with valuable artifacts in a city whose criminal history is rather serious, even more so with the disappearance of the ttans, need to make that a bit more believable. Especially with the fact that he gets caught, only given detention, not expected, and has the ring STILL on.

Finally, he cannot have a direct connection with any but the most minor of Greek figures.

For his powers. Don't copy paste from power listing. Describe that yourself as be more specific weight limits and such. We only need a description of what the character can do, not what the power itself is.

If others can take off his ring, that's a weakness, otherwise he needs another two, regardless he needs two weaknesses and his current one doesn't really count since it's very very very situational.

EDIT: you also need 100 posts before being granted your second character. Keep that in mind when editing him.