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longspear24 Newbie
Posts : 2 Join date : 2013-08-17 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Code Name: Villain or good guy?:
| Subject: Agent S Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:26 am | |
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Character Quote: "Lets shine some LIGHT on this subject"
Description: Spear has Black hair and blue eyes. He wheres a outfit that absorbs the solar energy from the sun. While wearing his outfit if he touches anything that is solar powered he automatically absorbs the energy from that item. He has a mystical symbol on his chest that looks like the sun with a flashlight in the middle of it. He has black leggings that also absorbs heat from the sun. On his back he has a Bow Staff which he uses if it is dark or there is no solar energy anywhere. His martial arts ability is very spot on with flips and the way he uses his staff. He  has yellow sneakers that are custom for his breed of people that absorb heat from solar items so that he can stay standing tall. They have the same symbol as his outfit has. The Bow Staff is breakable into two separate parts and can be joined to make that staff. This staff also has a symbol like the sneakers and the outfit. Except on the staff where you can break it into two, and make it one, the symbol is on both sides for when you break it into two pieces.
[size=25]===IDENTITY=== Full Name: Victor Spearson Nickname(s): The Spear, Spearson, Victor Von Spear, The Spirit Codename: Agent S Alias(es): Viktoor Carlsoon, Victor long, Spearson longAge: 15 Classification: N/A Affiliation: Neutral Evil ===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION=== Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Brown Height: 5'10" Weight: 179 lbs. Other Traits: Thick long Black hair with a binge Yellow around the outline as like Sinestro (Green Lantern's enemy)===POWERS=== Powers: Telekinesis (Solar Powered): His Telekinesis is only powered by the son and solar objects. Every time it is used it drains some of the power he has that was already powered by Solar Energy. If attacked from behind while performing this task he will have a total loss of power as if you unplug a computer and it takes time to reboot.
Telekinesis can only be used when the Shakra is lined up evenly with the Solar Power and it takes decades for someone to master that. When telekinesis is being performed the color may change over time depending on how long telekinesis has been being used. Tied with telekinesis is a stream of light which has more power taken from it then moving objects with your mind.
Electric Field (Yellow, Solar Powered): This electric field cannot only protect the person who is using this field but can also protect allies who are in the fight, or civilians about to be harmed. The more people you protect at a time, the more Energy you will be using. If you are only protecting yourself you can use it as if it were a shield.
The electric field can protect a city from a meteor shower, or a villains big attack. It is not recommended to protect a whole city because then you will be protecting a lot of people and as of the effect you will lose a boat load of energy and could possibly get wiped out from all the energy being used at a single time. if you are using a lot of energy to do a certain thing you could possibly injure yourself really bad.
Martial Arts Mastery: The only item not used by Solar Energy. The martial arts ability allows spear to move very quickly and have a great fighting ability. He carries around a Bow Staff everywhere he goes as a fighting utensil that can be squared off into two parts. When it is separated, it then has the power to use Solar Energy with electrical current.
Spear knows the Earthling taught fighting ability called "Tae Kwon Do." He has studied this for about 5 years and became a so called Black Belt in what the earthlings call it. With this ability he can do flips, use combo kicks and punches, and move fast enough and dodge fast enough to stop anyone who can come in my way.Skills: Weaknesses: Darkness: Loses all energy and can only use his Martial Arts Clouds: Covers up the sun so he has no Solar energy.Equipment: Bow Staff: The Bow Staff can be split into 2 parts and can use those two parts as electrical currents. But can also be turned into 1 weapon used with Martial arts.===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE=== Personality: The way Spear acts when he is with friends is the complete opposite of what he acts like when he is fighting in a battle alongside his friends. Spear is a very friendly person when it is light outside, but when it is stormy, or when it is dark in general it is all mopey wherever he goes if there is no solar power. If you get on the wrong side of Spear, no matter good or evil, it can be very dangerous.Strengths: The Solar Energy is the biggest strength he has. His Martial Arts skill is like his plan B of attacks, If it’s dark outside when battle is happening he can fight with his abilities of the Tae Kwon Do.Interests/Habits: He loves food . Nothing can compare to a bigger habit than eating. He is interested in every person who comes a long in his life.===PERSONAL BACKGROUND=== Family Members: N/A Place of Origin: Planet Destroyed[b]History: Back when Spear was a young lad, he was always so aggressive. No matter where he was or what he was doing he always took things to the next level. And thus cost his parents their lives. He was rough housing around with his father and he had just found out about his parents. His father had given him his old suit which was a standard issue suit for his kind of people. He had tried it on and accidentally shot his parents with a beam of light. Then things had gotten terribly wrong. His brother was 12 at the time while he was 11. So they both had the suit. but there was a young student who had gone wrong. They had a trainer at the academy who had visited planet earth to teach them the art of "Tae kwon Do" that he had learned from his trip. Spear and his brother were both a part of this academy along with another student whose father owned the place. This child had gone very bad to the bone. He started destroying stuff till there was nothing left. Spear's brother put him in a space pod to transport him off of the planet. Spear saw out of his pods window that his brother had gotten out safely. Spear had landed on a so called planet earth. Sample Rp: Spear was in a remote building in the middle of Jump City. He was wondering why he was there. He thought that it would be a great place to get energy full before he went out and caused chaos. His energy meter said it was only 73% full and he needed it to be full right now. He then screamed out... Light! I need more light now!He reaches the very top of the building to gain more energy. He raises both hands up and he sees that he gains energy twice as fast. Spear then sees some sort of ray of light shoot out from his hands and realizes he is at 100%. Spear shoots out a energy blast and down comes the nearest building. This power feels great. i love being 100% and it looks like everything is working just right.Spear flies up to the air and grabs the closest Citizen and runs to the top of a building with a radio tower on it. He takes the Citizen and uses his telekinesis to tie him down with wire. Nobody can stop Spear.... I am invincible to the naked eye hahahahahaha
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| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Agent S Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:37 am | |
| History can't have any direct ties to canon characters. His planet can be destroyed but he can't one v. one sinestro
Martial arts mastery is a power
All his powers need a description, probably looking to be more than two paragraphs each.
Weaknesses need explained, what happens with each.
the bowstaff description should be in equipment.
how does he know tae kwon doe when he isn't from earth?
Without spacefaring abilities how did he get here and why weren't he and his brother killed along with the rest of his race?
History probably needs at least a second paragraph.
If his suit isn't standard issue for his planet, how'd he get it. | |
| | | longspear24 Newbie
Posts : 2 Join date : 2013-08-17 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Code Name: Villain or good guy?:
| Subject: Re: Agent S Sat Aug 17, 2013 5:31 am | |
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| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Agent S Wed Aug 21, 2013 1:36 am | |
| If it takes decades to learn telekinesis how did he learn it in less than half a decade? Same with learning martial arts, he's only been practicing 3 or 4 years, he isn't a master, it's probably barely battle effective. Even if it was, he isn't super amazing and able to dodge everything. He'd just have slightly above average human strength, speed and reactions.
Nix the comparison to Sinestro, it's silly and out of place.
His dad just gave him a super powerful suit of one hit killness without any thought that something bad might happen? Furthermore, the brother and the character are just 'oh well' about this? How would this be standard issue for a species if it's obviously so erratic and easy to blow stuff up with?
How does a student, a child, destroy an entire planet of people who have the exact same suits and powers? How do they have the exact same suits and powers and still have a world if it's so easy to make mistakes with the suit and it can kill planets?
What is a shakra?
How is the field electric if it's solar powered? How is a field solely electric in the first place?
His suit should be listed in equipment as well.
Without a picture he will need a much longer description of what he looks like, not his stuff, what he looks like. You currently have a sentence about him.
That bit about him rebooting should clearly be in weaknesses.
How much can he lift with telekinesis?
No to protecting an entire city, or even an entire city block, an entire building is pushing your luck, even if it's a 2 story house. How tough is this shield anyways? Of course it can protect a city from a meteor shower, the air does that just fine. Meteors don't make it to sea level. A villain's big attack is not a valid measurement, ever.
If he can use telekinesis to fly that should be noted, along with how fast.
He won't be allowed to use his telekinesis directly on any character without you asking that person before you post and them agreeing to it. So pretty much never.
How is he evil? There's literally nothing showing that he's the lightest bit evil. | |
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