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Kip Zeta-class Metahuman
Posts : 387 Join date : 2012-09-22
RPG character Name: Alond'r Code Name: Wildfire Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Claire Lasy. Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:47 pm | |
| "I will not give UP!"Claire Montoya Lasy[size=25]===IDENTITY=== Full Name: Claire Montoya LasyNickname(s): Shadow Kat, Claire-Bear.Codename: Unseen Force.Alias(es): Age: 12Classification:Meta-human.Affiliation: Good.===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION=== Hair Color: Light BlackEye Color: Dark BlueHeight: 5,9Weight: 106 lbsOther Traits:===POWERS=== Powers: Invisibility is the state of an object that cannot be seen.  Claire can make up to three things invisible for about 5 minutes because the more she uses the ability, the faster it drains her. She can cloak things because she learned to focus her invisibility in her hands and send it out, mostly covering other things, making them invisible.
A force field, sometimes known as an energy shield, force shield, or deflector shield is a concept of a field tightly bounded of significant magnitude so that objects affected by the particular force relating to the field are unable to pass through the central axis of the field and reach the other side. Her force fields can support up to 100 lbs and if it's even 101 lbs, it will start to crack and eventually break. They work because Claire exerts her chi (energy) out into her hands and it forms into a shield that covers here. She can make force fields anywhere in 5 feet of her, including over other people.Yes she can move the force field without moving herself also.Skills: Cheerleading, Doing Homework, Doing flips and stuff.Weaknesses: Claire's weakness is talking about her dead parents. Whenever someone does this, She breaks down and gets distraught, unable to fight or do anything. Just breathe and cry. Her parents died when she was 5 in a horrible death (hit by a meteor). Claire learned to forget but when anyone mentions it, it brings her down. Only a sonar map can reveal where she was because she rarely is clumsy and she is as stealthy as a fox. Another weakness is electricity and she really doesn't like it and will mostly freeze like paralyzed when she is close to it. When she sees it but has a distance, she will get scared but when close, she freezes, leaving her vulnerable.Equipment: White small mini skirt, topped by a blue jacket with white buttons, and white sneakers.===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE=== Personality:Claire is a nice, cool girl. She knows when its time to play and then when it is time to not play. She can be fierce at times and then show her soft side, which is compassionate and loyal. When you mess with her or her friends, LOOK OUT, she is coming for you or if she's not, she is planning to get you when you least expect it. She mostly has 2 split sides of herself, fierce side and soft side.Strengths: Training, Intelligence, Agile.Interests/Habits: Doing homework, Studying, Watching tv.===PERSONAL BACKGROUND=== Family Members: Lucinda Tyht (Bio-Mom) Peter Tyht (Bio-Dad) Derek Lasy (Adoptive Dad) Tracy Lasy (Adoptive Mom) Selena Lasy (Adoptive Sister)Place of Origin Earth:Current City: Jump CityHistory: Claire was born in Jump City hospital, from 2 super-powered parents. As she grew to the age of 2, she began to exhibit signs of powers which were invisibility and force fields. She started turning invisible around the age of 4. When she was 5, she got turned into the orphanage since her parents died As she got to the age of 6, she started exhibiting force fields whenever she threw her hands up in a certain motion. Claire started growing around the kids in the orphanage because they called her names like "Freak" and "Monster". As she got to the age of 12 which she is at now, she was adopted by a nice couple. They took her to Jump City because that was where they lived together. Claire went to Feather's Concert where she met a guy named Danny and almost got attacked by a bulky guy. It was a good day because Danny was a good kind of boy. Sample RPI have a char already, Wildfire.
Last edited by Kip on Fri Jun 21, 2013 8:50 am; edited 5 times in total | |
| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Wed Jun 12, 2013 11:57 pm | |
| How much can she make invisible and for how long? Also, how does she make things invisible? Magic, technology?Â
You'll need a great deal more detail on her forcefields, how much can they support? How do they work, same as above? Can she move the forcefields? Can she move them other than relative to herself? That means can she push the forcefield forwards or backwards without moving herself.
She also needs some battle effective weakness. One more should do as log as you add 'sonar' to her existing weaknesses. She'd making noise or a sonar map would  reveal where she was pretty quick.
You also need to fix her history to fit the current history of the site. | |
| | | Kip Zeta-class Metahuman
Posts : 387 Join date : 2012-09-22
RPG character Name: Alond'r Code Name: Wildfire Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Thu Jun 13, 2013 11:41 am | |
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| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:34 pm | |
| I dont know if you saw it but you were pmed the current site history, please adjust to it. Also, please definite a...thing... It'd also be nice if you could cut down on the rest Of invisibility, people know what it is. You still need one more weakness. | |
| | | Kip Zeta-class Metahuman
Posts : 387 Join date : 2012-09-22
RPG character Name: Alond'r Code Name: Wildfire Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:00 pm | |
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| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:41 pm | |
| Okay, I'll be a bit more clear, everything up to spade attacking is fine, almost eveything after that didn't happen. | |
| | | Kip Zeta-class Metahuman
Posts : 387 Join date : 2012-09-22
RPG character Name: Alond'r Code Name: Wildfire Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:18 pm | |
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| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Sun Jun 16, 2013 3:40 am | |
| Spade Didnt attack the tower in this universe and until avytrius says otherwise fenrir doesn't exist. | |
| | | Kip Zeta-class Metahuman
Posts : 387 Join date : 2012-09-22
RPG character Name: Alond'r Code Name: Wildfire Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Mon Jun 17, 2013 6:00 pm | |
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| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Mon Jun 17, 2013 7:55 pm | |
| You still need to finish the rest of your history, it's pretty incomplete right now. If Danny is cla character you can keep it but it can't be the same Danny as the rper's character and...how is she twelve, in school, has a phone but ran away from the orphanage? Also, she has adoptive parents but no where in your history is she adopted. | |
| | | Kip Zeta-class Metahuman
Posts : 387 Join date : 2012-09-22
RPG character Name: Alond'r Code Name: Wildfire Villain or good guy?: Good
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Fri Jun 21, 2013 8:51 am | |
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| | | The Muse The Doctor
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 28
RPG character Name: Vira Code Name: Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Claire Lasy. Mon Jun 24, 2013 8:53 am | |
| your history is not complete. Beyond just structure you're supposed to get close as possible to three paragraphs.
Anoter note on her powers, can she 'fly' with her forcefields? | |
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