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Name: Zanar Mithalkar Valexii
Code Name: Zanar
Villain or good guy?: Evil

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"The Psychotic Twisted Serial Killer, Gentleman, and former Demi-God Demon"

Zan Valexii
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IDENTITY


Full Name: Zanar Mithalkar Valexii

Code Name: Zanar

Classification: Kis'har Demon Demi-God

Affiliations: Evil

Age: 9,481,237

Birthday: January 1st, 9479225 B.C.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION



Eye Color: Red

Clothing: Chains over hands and half of forearms for added protection, fire resistant boots, Leathery silk cape.

Weight: 279lbs

Height: 7'3"

Other: Zanar's skin is hard and rough to the touch and is always being shown; it is completely pitch black. He is continuously having his forearms, hands, lower legs, and feet engulfed with fire. He is, in appearance dark and grim looking and is always having good posture. Even though he has just chains, a cape and boots on he still refuses to wear more for it is unnecessary, unlike most individuals Zanar Mithalka Valexii has currently no genitalia or any other certain features that clothing is needed to cover up like other demons, humans, aliens, etc. may have the need to use clothing for. He tends to give off a dark aura of which can be seen by many. Its usually seen as black, and blood red flames emanating around his body.

POWERS AND ABILITIES



Teleportation: He can merely teleport with just a seconds thought and do this effortlessly, though he can only go 4 yards per teleport. Teleporting in water takes him more time only allowing him to teleport 2 yards per teleport. If he wishes he can teleport and continuously stay in the air and travel that way though he is unable to massive combat during it.

Supernatural Healing Factor: With this Zanar can heal from any wound at all and over time his skin builds a rough and hard exterior which if given enough time and if he has the proper balance of mind and body his skin becomes impenetrable, though this can take weeks to years to accomplish though if he is to do this he will be an unstoppable juggernaut in all close combat. His skin, the hardened skin, will be totally gone after 2 weeks. It can also be easily diminished if he is completely (from head to toe) sumerged in water for more that 30 seconds. Zanar is usually unable to do this and it has a low sucess rate but, if he accomplishes this, avoid all hostile acts near or towards him.

Supernatural Summoning: Zanar can summon 1 creature that can look like anything or anyone at all, this creature will be at the power level of a adverage meta-human and no matter what it takes shape of the damage it can inflict will never change. This summoned creature can also be split into millions of clones of it. Although with each split the power is halfved for each clone and also all the clones together will get smaller for every new clone. After the 8th split/clone the creature and the clones will have losted all their power to even inflict a tiny amont of damage. This summoning will always stay around untill dismissed by Zanar. After the 8th split/clone they become unable to physically harm anything.

Advanced Combat: Through the years Zanar has been exposed to just about every fighting style and has picked up a few things along the way. His fighting is composed mainly of 5 aspects: the savage and vicious Nildash demon fighting which involves removal of skins and body parts along with mutilation of bodies while the foe still lives, they tend to slow the victims dieing process from blood lost by using fire from torches to close the wounds as they make more. Zanar also has the skills to perform some martial arts obtained from China during its Golden Era. The next is the brutality of the Barbarians and the Huns; which this would be explained more but seriously doesn't need to say anything more. Finally is some 21st century boxing skills he managed to pick up on from street thugs he sees fighting. Since his fighting style varies he is a jack of all trades (meaning he can use the fighting skills well but not someone with more experience and is a master at one of his 5 skills) with his advanced combat. They key to defeating his advanced combat is to be a master of one of his 5 combat styles and use it against him. Someone without combat skills should not comit a hostility towards Zanar up close. If you had ranged attacks it would certainly help against him.

High Intellect: Even though Zanar is savage, he is also very intelligent and is not impulsive. He is able to trick many into doing what he wants and converting minions to help him if he would ever need it like he has done in the past. He also focuses in on most movements of the foes so, if there is ever a second battle, he can know what to expect and have the upper hand. In dire times, he does try to negotiate with foes and wants to solve the issue fairly. With this, he also will not become over-confident easily, but he will know who to pick fights with and won't fight ones that he knows that could be him. This way he can survive and better himself for more battles to come (he didn't live for 9.5 million year to die from underestimating a foes power and then dieing because of it). He looks at the battle (even if he would be victor) as pointless to proceed in if he knows who will win. Though he may also have a plan which in normal nights he always has something brewing...

Flame Body: Zanar can fight up close rather brutishly and precisely at times. As well his power in close range fighting is quite good but can be out done by a expert fighter. With Flame Body his hands, forearms, lower legs, and feet are on fire continuously which can pose as an issue in certain areas. Then he can also change the temperature of the flames and the size of the flames. He has expected to have combat situations many times in the future and so he has metal chains on his hands and forearms that are always partially melting. When in close combat the temperature of the fire is at 230 degrees at all times. If he gets a hold on your skin anywhere at all he will attempt to focus in and rise the temperature to 400 degrees; this will take him 3 minutes to do considering the temperture cannot instantaneously pop from 230 to 400 degrees any faster. If he is given more time and there is still more left to burn he will keep riseing the temperature. Zanar does not have massive strength at all his strength would be match to the adverage male human strength. Since he won't be able to hold anyone more stronger in strength he will not be able to do massive burning to any of their flesh. With that said he will have had scalded anyones unprotected skin and have done sever burns. Fire proof equipment is advise when ever fighting him. Fire proof equipment shouldn't be cloth it should be the hardest material able to obtain if it is able to be riped or penetrated by a velociraptor's attackes it will not last a scratch from Zanar's claws that resemble that of a velociraptor's.

Weaknesses: While submerged in water it will negate Flame Body and give slower travel to teleportation. Other Worldly Screeches that are harmfull to even animals that can only here certain higher frequencies; EX: Dog weeps when the dog whisle is blown on. This screech will make all focus to be lost for Zanar and he will lose ability to utilize any of his powers this will have to be something more high then a dog whisle if this sound is maintained for to long Zan will go unconsious and into a coma for 24hrs- a Week. Further more if you have fire resistant gear to make you resistant to fire and/or have a natural immunity towards it Zanar's upclose combat will be like geting hit with a feather from crow. Also all his powers are based on focusing although it will be hard to break his focus it can be done and once done he will not be able to have control over his powers and will be a powerless demon at most.(look below in the Psychological Profile part for a more detailed descrition)

PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE



Likes: Killing, death, genocides, struggles, sick humor, good luck, and the specimen known as a Crow

Dislike: Fortune upon others that will die within a years time, Doves, Those weak beings that think they are better than the villains in combat when they have a swarm of their allies helping them out because 1 on 1 fights are to hard for them, that Youtube I hear a lot about (if anything or anyone is taking over the minds of others it will me Zanar Mithalkar Valexii), when others mock me, disrespect, disobidience, and those who are false gods.

Strengths: Mastery over powers, being a figure of worship, executing/execution of others, Trickery, Converting others to join his side

Weaknesses: Water is a big weakness it makes his powers for pyro combat negate and his teleportation distance is reduced by half and he cannot summon anything more while submerged in water, he gets a large ego when surrounded by worshipers resulting in extremely risky ideas and actions, if secluded from all life and all things he will go insane and will lose virtually all focus, if he loses his focus he will not be able to execute any of his powers except for flame body but the fire temp. is decreased to 150 degrees for a max temp. He will also not be able to fight hand to hand combat well if to much focus is lost. He has a high tolerance with things that make others lose focus though if a high enough pitched ringing sound that can make the ears bleed of dogs this sound will take all Zan's focus away completely and it will also sedate him for months even. Further more if you have fire resistant gear to make you resistant to fire and/or have a natural immunity towards it Zanar's upclose combat will be like geting hit with a feather from crow. Also all his powers are based on focusing although it will be hard to break his focus it can be done and once done he will not be able to have control over his powers and will be a powerless demon at most.

Personality: Zanar Mithalkar Valexii is a bit grim, yet pleasant at times. He values fairness in combat and many other things as well. He tends to strictly stick to his plans and he does all in his power to never stray from them. He is a bit serious at many times and thinks of things towards pure logic. He studies some foes to get a handle on all their mind sets and ways of doing things so when he must face them he is prepared. He tends to like to make sure everything is handled and he is often at times seeing himself doing all the work and looking at the others as to incompetent for what he needs done. He prefers to work alone but if he works with others he will demand respect from all of them and if he doesn't get it he tends to go over bored and plot a painful lesson. He also can be a bit sadistic and when he sets out to defeat someone he tend to completely horrific. He also believes his first thought on anything most of the time is 100% correct which tend to be his downfall. Even though he is a killer he is actually polite and is sometimes refered to as a gentlemen which is extremely weird for a evil pure breed demon. He also can be negotiated with though if someone has maddened him there is rarely ever a chance to change his mind. Zanar also tend to have a alternating look on situations, which has him doing a great deed one time and then later doing a horribly bad deed. He can have a unstable mind at times and have conflicting thoughts of doing good and doing bad. This how ever is something he prefers to keep other influences out of. This also infers that his next act of good or bad will be unpredictable. He may be a unstable and uncontrollible ticking time bomb but he is open to converstation about the past and his thoughts on almost any matter but like most demons he demands respect and will become hostile to any disrespect towards him, his kind, his thoughts, his choices, or his home no matter the person. Other parts about his personality are that when doing good it will most likly mean something, or have a hidden factor behind it which pulls him towards doing the deed. He believes that he won't be controled by anyone and if he was he would most likly act in vicious reactions of hysteria. Though he will always be evil throughout this and he will tend to always embrace his demon side which for most demons is evil.

PERSONAL BACKROUND



Family: Keridda Mallas Valexii God Of Pain and Suffering(Father), Zona Valexii (sister)
Place of Origin: Kish'ar Domain, Dark Realm
Current City: Jump City
History: In the beginning Zanar was the rightful demon to be next in line among his sister and himself to be the new God of Pain and Suffering which maintains all pain and agony through many realms and worlds. But unfortunately for him this was to never be given to him for many more eons. A war among the demons had broke out, and the power of their god was stolen from them and the hate, pain, and suffering was scattered amongst all kinds of beings throughout the places they had once before watched over, with the exception of the Dark Realm. This war started mainly because of how the other demons felt towards the power of the Kis'har the race that was bestowed the god of pain and suffering to one of their own, which gave him the power to distribute these feeling how ever they wished.

The Kis'har in general were known to be the civil and fair demons of the dark realm they lacked power but made up for what all the other demon races did not have, a civil and beliefs of balance and fairness. This is why the other demon races started he war towards them because the Kis'Har not only gave these feelings to all the realms they looked over but also gave the feelings to their own kind. The war raged for centuries though the Kis'Har were eventually pacified and the God was killed.

Though this was not the end of the race, after many decades Zanar had finally come to be the head of the clan and he surpassed many of the others in brawn and brains. His sister Zondra unfortunately was banished to a void to never be opened from what the demon necomancers say. The Kis'Har domain was also victim to consecutive raids by the Nildash demons every month. Soon Zanar had enough of this and he decided to form a small group of those who wish to leave and they would go through the central rift in hopes it would take them away from this place and they could hopefully one day gather up enough power to regain control of their realm.

So on the night of the attempt to escape the small group managed to get just a few yards away the central rift when some Nildash spotted them while they were on a surprise raid. The Kis'har members and Zanar tried as hard as they could to defeat the Nildash but unfortunately all but one died and Zanar was the survivor. He managed to get to the gate right before the Nildash could shut it down, and Zanar was then on the world known as Earth during 790,847 B.C. . He explored the whole world aimlessly trying to survive while also looking for good power sources but none came up. Through his time on earth he eventually lost hope for his race and he could no longer feel anyone of them. These thoughts of all his race dead and no one left haunted him. He eventually gave up all together and so he then decided to expose himself by 348,892 B.C. to the humans which all were terrified of him, but eventually most of them he befriended or the others he met worshiped him as the god he could have been.

By 1692 he offered his service in protection and being hidden to witches who were being hunted in return for a future favor. Some denied and wished to rather die than help a demon which they got, and other accepted the terms. By the 18th century Zanar requested all the witches that he helped for assistance. There was a total of 63 witches that he got there and with their help he got them to bring forth a interdimensional tear into the void his sister was trapped in to finally let her out so then the 2 could be reunited. The ritual was a success, unfortunately Zondra had grown mad, and hysterical while in the void and was in complete shock of where she was and ended up running off on a short rampage this was very bad considering while in the void she had not lost her power and it actually grew over time.

Zanar was shocked at first but then decided to let her blow off the steam for a while. While Zondra was killing everything she saw, Zanar decided to kill all 63 of the witches and take their power and permanently give himself power beyond his races comprehension. He did this also mainly because he would despise himself if his sister ever became more powerful them himself. With his power matching or even greater than that of Zondra's he was able to catch up with her by 1981. When he did she was less insane and more herself she also had taken work in creating a powerful gem that would conceal souls, torture humans as its would connect itself to them and she would trap an evil spirit in the gem that she would give her name to. This gem would be given to humans to cause great suffering, fear, and/ or pain.

Though when this gem was created with some help from Zanar's powers it was later confiscated by the pure sages and sealed somewhere that the location was left unknown to Zondra and Zanar by 1998. As following this Zondra eventually left Zanar alone to go out and search for the missing gem, she hasn't been heard from by anyone to Zanar's knowlege since. To this day Zanar lives alone in his underground home in Jump City. He is constantly working to find his sisters where abouts and is also working to convert humans one by one, in hopes that one day his cult will be controller of all of Jump City.



Sample RP


Night has fallen over Jump City, to some citizens the night is over but not for Zanar. Down on a abandoned street a light fog covers the area. Some foot steps can be heard in the distance and a buring smell hits the air. The stench of burning metal and sidewalk is carried all around. 4 Flames are distinguished and now a body comes out of the mist walking slowly, and gracfully to a apartment building. Zanar walks towards the doors and grabs the metal door hinges and they slowly, but not completely, melt in his hands. He removes his hands from the hinges, he has jamed the door completely. He then with a black puff of smoke he's gone into the building, he starts go into every room silently and partially melts all the door hinges and windows shut, jaming all exits and entry ways. Then he stops and focuses all his strength and his arms and legs burst into a more hotter and much larger flame catching all things around him on fire and making a pyre. The rest of the building quickly catchs on fire; he now goes in to a room, children start to scream as flesh can be heard tearing for a minute and then the screams stop from with inside the room.

By now everyone in the building is awake and in a fright and they can't escape the building. One by one each person dies and is torn to shreads. Though suddenly some bashing sounds are heard and something hits the ground in a hallway. Some of the apartment people got out of their rooms Zanar quickly teleports in front of them while they are just feet from the doors out. The people become terrified at the demon before them covered in blood holding a childs head by the hair. "Now then where are all you going?" he gives out a small laugh and says "Here I thought everyone was having fun with me! Heheh then here I will have to show you something more fun....hope you enjoy this as much as I will......." he tosses down the childs severed head and grabs the lady in the crowd by the arm not care that his claws are burning her flesh off slowly as she screams in pain. "Now, now.... you think this is painful? ....well I guess I'll just have to show you something better, considering I don't want you in pain do I now. So lets show you something different, is that alright with you?" The woman nods not caring what it is long as the pain being inflicted to her arm stops, while others telling her not to yes fearing that the demon has something worse in mind.

Zan lets her go, she looks at him in terror. "Ugh, you know what I am bored playing games enough of this!" He teleports out of sight the people start to calm down choking on the smoke more and more and they find the doors jamed. They go at the doors for minutes. And they finnaly give up. Out of no where Zan appears siting nicly on a table. "Oh dear I must have jamed the door wonder why on earth I would ever do such a thing.......wait I know! I don't want you to leave, though to bad you stoped trying it was fun to watch you put effort into something meaningless. So as to help myself out considering I have many other things to do. Lets get onto finishing this up already! I'm sure you have plenty of things to do today, and I'd hate for a bad nights sleep to kill your day.....or you." he walks up to the woman clowly and he grabs hold of her head and heats his hand up to 400 degrees and squeezes her face while laughing. The face starts to burn down to nothing and then he drops the body the ground. "So whose next" He ends up skining the remaining 2 peoples slowly and by dawn no one in the house was left alive and a childs head was missing. Zan got back home and is cheerfully sleeping with a childs head mounted on the wall next to other various severed heads of creatures in his underground. Zanar will be back the next night of fun with the citizens...


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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 06, 2012 2:41 pm

I'll get this one guys! Smile

First off, before I look at it in more detail, could you please try to separate the different points in your Psychological Profile section and make sure all of your powers are separated? This makes it easier for me to review and approve!

Also, although it isn't required, a reference picture would be nice!

Lastly, please try to make sure your character isn't overpowered. The more powers would require a longer and more detailed history on how your character got each one.

Once you've made those quick edits, I'll get right to reviewing! Good luck! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 06, 2012 6:43 pm

Alright as for the powers I mentions in the history that he toke the witches magic for himself and used it to give him powers equal to his sisters so she isnt the most powerful being there though sorry if that was less clear and i will explain it more. As for the weaknesses I forgot to add the huge factor that can make him incredable weak. Though I'm unsure of what you mean by your first question.
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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 06, 2012 8:55 pm

Ok yeah I was just reading what you said again and i understand now earlier was just pulling allnighter so thats probaly why it confused me. Anyways I have it fixed and if theres anything else in need of improvment please do tell me. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeSat Apr 07, 2012 8:03 am

Well turns out i just had the pic put up incorrectly so i got it fixed and as for the whole thing i revised and edited some parts let me know if there is anything else.
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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeSun Apr 08, 2012 1:41 am

Sorry for the delay! I decided to sleep last night rather than starting this...but, better late than ever! Smile

I'm just going to give my thoughts step by step, cool? ...Cool.

I'll be writing in orange!!!

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"The Psychotic Twisted Serial Killer, Gentleman, and former Demi-God Demon"

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See! Pictures just bring your character to life! Now I am terribly frightened of what might happen to my own characters if I approve him...COOL! Smile

Nice picture choice!


IDENTITY


Full Name: Zanar Mithalkar Valexii

Okay, first off, I'd like to point out that surnames were developed to show a person's occupation or lineage, so, you don't necessarily need a last name for someone this old...although I am unfamiliar with how names of demons were developed...so...this should be fine...this is just me rambling...

Code Name: Zan Valexii

You might want to consider a nickname for the government/titans/etc to refer to him as.

Classification: Kis'har Demon Demi-God cool

Affiliations: Evil Gasp! ...Still cool...

Age: 9,481,237 Alright, but keep in mind that, with someone this old, I'd expect a mother of a history section. It should include basically anything that is worth mentioning in his 9.5 million years of existence...

Birthday: January 1st, 9479225 B.C.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION



Eye Color: Red

Clothing: Chains over hands and half of forearms for added protection, fire resistant boots, Leathery silk cape.

Weight: 279lbs

Height: 7'3"

Other: Zanar's skin is hard and rough to the touch and is always being shown; it is completely pitch black. He is continiously continuously having his forearms, hands, lower legs, and feet engulfed with fire. He is, in appearance, dark and grim looking and is always though having good posture. Even though he has just chains, a cape and boots on he still refuses to wear more for it is unnecessary, unlike most individuals Zanar Mithalka Valexii has currently no genitalia or any other certain features that clothing is needed to cover up like other demons, humans, aliens, etc. may have the need to use clothing for. He tends to give off a dark aura of which can be seen by many. Its usually seen as black, and bloodly red flames eminating emanating around his body.

POWERS AND ABILITIES



Teleportation: He can merely teleport with just a second's thought and do this effortlessly, though he can only go 4 yards per teleport. Teleporting in water takes him more time only allowing him to teleport 2 yards per teleport. If he wishes he can teleport and continiously continuously stay in the air and travel that way though he is unable to massive combat during it. It's good that you've placed limits on your powers...most don't do that...good job! Smile

Supernatural Healing Factor: With this, Zanar can heal from any wound at all and, over time, his skin builds a rough and hard exterior which, if given enough time and if he has the proper balance of mind and body, his skin becomes harder than adamantium, though this can take weeks to years to acomplish accomplish though if he is to do this he will be an unstopable unstoppable juggernaut in all close combat. His skinthough, the hardened skin, will be deminished diminished after 2 weeks. Zanar is usually unable to do this and it has a low sucess success rate butif but, if he acomplishes accomplishes this, avoid all hostile acts near him. Alright, mostly grammatical stuff there, but, there is something important here. I like how you include limits for how long he can keep the hardened skin, but, I'd recommend bringing up a 'minus' for this huge 'plus', like, perhaps he is slower with this hardened skin, or some other 'minus' besides the fact that it is hard to activate and that it doesn't last forever (which are two pretty good minuses so far, I'd just like a little bit more, please! Smile)

Supernatural Summoning: Zanar can summon 1 creature that can look like anything or anyone at all, this creature will be at the power level of Zanar and no matter what it looks like, the damage it can inflict will never change. This summoned creature can also be spilt split into millions of clones of it. Although with each split it gets weaker and weaker and also the ceatures creatures get smaller. Afterthe After the 8th split the creature will have had lost all its power. This summoning always stays around untill until dismissed by Zanar and even though the creture creature will get weaker wih with every split, its defense increases for every split. After the 8th split it becomes unable to physically harm anything and unable to take and any damage thrown at them. Okay, this part I do have a bit of a problem with. This seems to make your character quite overpowered if these minions are as powerful as Zanar, since he is already quite powerful. I would recommend weakening these minions considerably. They could be stronger than average humans and perhaps put up a fight with a metahuman but they certainly shouldn't be as powerful as their master. Don't get me wrong, I like the idea of summoning, it just has to be dealt with correctly.

Advanced Combat: Through the years, Zanar has been exposed to just about every fighting style and has pickd picked up a few things along the way. His fighting is composed mainly of 5 aspects: the savage and vicious Nildash demon fighting which involves removal of skins and body parts along with mutalation mutilation of bodies while the foe still lives, they tend to slow the victims dieing process from blood lost by using fire from torchs torches to close the wounds as they make more. Zanar also has the skills to perform some martial arts obtained from China during its Golden Era. The next is the brutality of the Barbarians and the Huns; which this would be explained more but seriously doesn't need to say anthing anything more. Finally is some 21st centry century boxing skills he managed to pick up on from street thugs he sees fighting. This ability is fine (although this could be put into the skills section, which I see you've omitted...). You could also place some form of measuring stick. How could he beat up? Who could beat him up? Etc. Etc.

High Intelect Intellect: Zanar Eeven though Zanar is savage, he is also very intellegent intelligent and is not impulsive,. Hhe is able to trick many into doing whathe what he wants and converting minions to help him if he would ever need it like he has down done in the past. He also focuses in on most movements of the foes so, if there is ever a second battle, he can know what to expect and have th the upper hand. In dire times, he does try to negociate negotiate with foes and wants to solve the issue fairly. With this, he also will not become over-confident easily, but he will know who to pick fights with and won't fight ones that he knows that could be him, not because he is a coward, it's so he can survive and better himself. He looks at the battle (even if he would be victor) as pointless to proceed in if he knows who will win. Though he may also have a plan which in normal nights he always has something brewing... This ability looks nice too although it seems like you've got some run-on sentences in there... Don't worry, not that big of a deal Wink

Flame Body: Zanar can fight up close rather brutfully brutishly (sounds silly, but that's the word haha) and precisely (parallel sentences y'know Wink) at times as well. Hhis power in close range fighting is quite good but can be out done by a expert fighter. With Flame Body his hands, forearms, lower legs, and feet are on fire continiously continuously which can pose as an issue in certain areas; he can change the temperture temperature of the flames and the size of the flames. He has expected to have combat situations alot a lot of times in the future and so, he has metal chains on his hands and forearms that are always partially melting. Alright, this part seems mostly okay, but, could you clarify what exactly would happen in say hand to hand combat? Would the opponent get scalded too intensely to endure? Could someone survive a few blows without feeling overwhelmed?

Weaknesses: While semurged submerged in water it will negate Flame Body and give slower travel to teleportation. Other Worldly Screeches that are harmfull harmful to even animals that can only here certain higher frequencies; EX: Dog with their Dog Whisles Whistles. This screech will make all focus to be lost for Zanar and he will lose ability to utilize any of his powers this will have to be something more high then a dog whisle whistle if this sound is maintained for to long Zan will go unconsious unconscious and into a coma for 24hrs- a Week. (look below in the Psychological Profile part for a more detailed descrition description)
Alright, so, we usually allow four powers max...I count six in this app...
You have some valuable weaknesses to counteract them...but...you might want to consider some eliminations or some negations on his strength...or you could add in a major weakness...but...I'll get back to you on the powers after you've made the other edits. You do have a few major powers...but...I'm just not sure if it makes up for the high powers...

PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE



Likes: Killing, death, genocides, struggles, sick humor, good luck, and the specimen known as a Crow

Dislike: Fortune upon others that will die within a years time, Doves, Those weak beings that think they are better than the villians villains in combat when they have a swarm of their allies helping them out becuase because 1 on 1 fights are to hard for them, that Youtube I hear alot a lot about (if anything or anyone is taking over the minds of others it will me Zanar Mithalkar Valexii), when others mock me, disrespect, unobidience disobedience, and those who are false gods.

Strengths: Mastery over powers, being a figure of worship, executing/execution of others, Foolier (Um...what???), Converting others to join his side

Weaknesses: Water is a big weakness it makes his powers for pyro combat negate and his teleportation distance is reduced by half and he cannot summon anything more while sumerged submerged in water, he gets a large ego when surrounded by worshipers resulting in extreamly extremely risky ideas and actions, if secluded from all life and all things he will go insane and will lose virtually all focus, if he loses his focus he will not be able to execute any of his powers except for flame body but the fire temp. is decreased to 150 degrees for a max temp. Hhe will also not be able to fight hand to hand combat well if to much focus is lost, he has a high tolerance with things that make others lose focus though if a high enough pitched ringing sound that can make the ears bleed of dogs this sound will take all Zan's focus away completely and it will also sedate him for months even.

Personality: Zanar Mithalkar Valexii is a bit grim, yet plesent pleasant at times. He values fairness in combat and many other things aswell as well. He tends to strictly stick to his plans and he does all in his power to never stray from them. He is a bit serious at many times and thinks of things towards purly pure logic. He studies some foes to get a handle on all their mind sets and ways of doing things so when he must face them he is prepared. He tends to like to make sure everything is handled and he is often at times seeing himself doing all the work and looking at the others as to incompetent for what he needs done. He prefers to work alone but if he works with others he will demand respect from all of them and if he doesn't get it he tends to go over bored and plot a painful lesson. He also can be a bit sadistic and when he sets out to defeat someone he tend to completely horrific. He also believes his first thought on anything most of the time is 100% correct which tend to be his downfall. Even though he is a killer he is actually polite and sometime refered is sometimes referred to as a gentlemen which is extreamely extremely weird for a pure breed demon. He also can be nogociated negotiated with though if someone has maddened him there is rarly rarely ever a chance to change his mind.
He sounds like a fun character to roleplay with once we get these kinks worked out! Smile

PERSONAL BACKROUND



Family: Keridda Mallas Valexii God Of Pain and Suffering(Father), Zona Valexii (sister)
Place of Origin: Kish'ar Domain, Dark Realm
Current City: Jump City
History: In the begining beginning Zanar was the rightful demon to be next in line among his sister and himself to be the new God of Pain and Suffering which maintains all pain and agony through many realms and worlds. But, unfortunatly unfortunately for him, this was to never be given to him for many more eons. A war among the demons had broke out, and the power of their god was stolen from them and the hate, pain, and suffering was scattered amongst all kinds of beings throughout the places they had once before watched over, with the exception of the Dark Realm. This war started mainly because of how the other demons felt towards the power of the Kis'har the race that was bestowed the god of pain and suffering to one of their own, which gave him the power to distribute these feeling how ever they wished.

The Kis'har in general were known to be the civil and fair demons of the dark realm they lacked power but made up for what all the other demon races did not have, a civil and beliefs of balance and fairness. This is why the other demon races started he the war towards them because the Kis'Har not only gave these feelings to all the realms they looked over but also gave the feelings to their own kind becuase[strike] because they wished to have complete fairness. The war raged for many, many, many [strike]centries centuries though the Kis'Har were eventually pacified and the God was killed.

Though this was not the end of the race, after many decades Zanar had final came finally come to be the head of the clan and he proceed surpassed many of the others in bronze brawn and brains. His sister Zondra unfortunatly unfortunately was banished to a void to never be opened from what the demon necomancers say. The Kis'Har domain was also victim to consecutive raids by the Nildash demons every month. Soon Zanar had enough of this and he decided to form a small group of those who wish to leave and they would go through the central rift in hopes it would take them away from this place and they could hopefully one day gather up enough power to regain control of their realm.

So on the night of the attempt to escape the small group managed to get just a few yards away the central rift when some Nildash spoted spotted them while they were on a surprise raid. The Kis'har members and Zanar tried as hard as they could to defeat the Nildash but unfortunatly unfortunately, all but one died and Zanar was the surviver survivor. He managed to get to the gate right before the Nildash could shut it down, and Zanar was then on the world known as Earth during 790,847 B.C. . He explored the whole world aimlessly tryng trying to survive while also looking for good power sources but known none came up. Through his time on earth he eventually lost hope for his race and he could no longer feel anyone of them. These thoughts of all his race dead and no one left huanted haunted him. He eventually gave up all together and so he then decided to epose expose himself by 348,892 B.C. to the humans which all were terrified of him, but eventually most of them he befriended or the others he met worshiped him as the god he could have been.

By 1692 he offered his service in protection and being hidden to witches who were being hunted in return for a future favor. Some denied and wished to rather die then than help a demon which they got, and other accepted the terms. By the 18th century Zanar requested all the whiches witches that he helped for assistance. There was a total of 63 witches that he got there and with their help he got them to bring forth a interdimensional tear into the void his sister was trapped in to finally let her out so then the 2 could be reunited. The ritual was a success, unfortunatly unfortunately Zondra had grown mad, and hysterical while in the void and was in complete shock of where she was and ended up running off on a short time rampage this was very bad considering while in the void she had not lost her power and it actually grew over time.

Zanar was shocked at first but then decided to let her blow off the steam for a while. While Zondra was killing everything she saw, Zanar decided to kill all 63 of the witches and take their power and permanently give himself power beyond his races comprehension. He did this also mainly becuase because he would despise himself if his sister ever became more powerful them himself. With his power matching or even greater than that of Zondra's he was able to catch up with her by 1981. When he did she was less insane and more herself she also had taken work in creating a powerful gem that would conceal souls and she would trap an evil spirit in the gem that she would give her name to. This gem would be given to humans to cause great suffering, fear, and/ or pain.

Though when this gem was created with some help from Zanar's powers it was later confiscated by the pure sages and sealed somewhere that the location was left unknown to Zondra and Zanar by 1998. As following this Zondra eventually left Zanar alone to go out and search for the missing gem, she hasn't been heard from by anyone to Zanar's knowlegde since. To this day Zanar lives alone in his underground home in Jump City. He is constantly working to find his sister's whereabouts and is also working to convert humans one by one, in hopes that one day his cult will be controller of all of Jump City.



Sample RP


Nights fallen over Jump City to the citizens night is over but not for Zan Valexii. Down on a abandoned street a light fog covers the area. Some foot steps can be heard in the distance and a buring smell hits the air and the stench of burning metal and sidewalk is carried all around. 4 Flames are distinguished and now a body comes out of the mist walking slowly, and gracfully to a apartment building. Zan walks towards the doors and grabs the metal door henges and they slowly almost melt in his hands. He stop melting the enges and he has jamed the door completly. He then with a black smoke puff he's gone into the building, he starts go into every room silently and melts al doorsand windows shut. Then he stops and focuses all his strength and his ars and legs burst into a more hotter and much larger flame catching all things around him on fire. The buildin quickly catchs a flame and he goes in to a room children start to scream as flesh can be heard tearing and then te screams from the room stop.

By now everyone in the building is awake and in a fright and they can't escape the building. One by one each person dies and is torn to shread, though wait some of them go out of there rooms Zan quickly teleports in front of them while they are just feet from the doors out. The people become terrified at the demon before them covered in blood holding a childs head by the hair. "Now then where are all you going?" he gives out a small laugh and says "Here I have to show you something, tell me what you think..." he tosses down the childs svered head and grabs the lady in the crowd by the arm not care that his claws are burning her flesh off slowly as she screams in pain. "Now, now you think this is painful....well I guess I'll just have to show you something different" The woman nods not caring what it is long as he pain stops, while others tell her not to yes.

Zan lets her go, she looks are him in terror. "Ugh, am bored playing games enough of this" He teleports out of sight the people start to calm down choking on the smoke more and more and they find the doors jamed. Out of no where Zan appears behind then siting nicly on a table. "Oh dear I must have jamed the door wonder why on earth I would ever do such a thing.......wait I know!" he walks up to the woman he burn and heats his hand up to 700 degrees and presses it on her face while laughing while he face starts to melt down to nothing and then he drops the body the ground. "So whose next" He ends up peeling the remaining 2 peoples skins off slowly and by dawn no one in the house was left alive. And Zan is ceerfully sleeping in his underground home waiting for the next night of fun...
Alright, I'll let you reread your roleplay and make edits before I mess with it...there are definitely a lot of grammatical errors and spelling errors that you might want to check...you have to use 'an' rather than 'a' when used before a word that begins with a vowel.......

Alright! Overall, this is a character with a lot of potential and I'd like to see him a approved soon and seen in action! Just make some of the edits I've mentioned and we'll go from there! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeSun Apr 08, 2012 5:21 am

I forgot to mention that my keyboard and I can sometimes commit murder on grammer. lol Anyways I got all the corrections you asked me to fixed done, if i missed one please forgive me and if you can let me know. I am also aware that this site is PG-13 andmy Sample RP may not be acceptable, and I will try to tone down though to be clear this is not my worst(meaning best). I tend to go out to the full extent of evil for my villian characters so if it is to much let me know.

P.S. Maybe give me a detailed description of what this site means exactly when they say PG-13, providing my sample RP is to much.
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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeMon Apr 09, 2012 8:30 pm

Alright So s for this next part I have also updated a bit more on personality for i didn't feel it totally expressed all i wanted it to near the ending.
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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeWed Apr 11, 2012 5:50 pm

Alright, I think I'll approve it as long as you remember to double check grammar and that you don't get carried away with teleportation.

I dub this app...

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PostSubject: Re: Zan Valexii-Approved!!   Zan Valexii-Approved!! Icon_minitimeWed Apr 11, 2012 6:05 pm

No worries I promise I won't get carried away with the teleports, I will also get a auto-check for grammer. Smile
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