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flamearon Newbie
Posts : 4 Join date : 2011-08-06
RPG character Name: Wykkyd Wonder Code Name: Wykkyd Sister Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 3:18 am | |
| Name- Wykkyd Wonder Code Name- Wykkyd Sister Real Name- Unknown Age- 16 Hero or Villan- Villan Species- Mutated Human Place of Origin- Unknown
Physical Description Eyes-Red Hair- Black and chest length Skin color- Very pale Weight- 115 lbs Height- 5 foot 6 Etc- A scar acrossed the top of her hand in the shape of a X. There are many scars on her body but they are very small and minor.
Personality Description I am very laid back and don't speak much. Some consider me a mute or emotinless like my brother, Kyd Wykkyd. I do have a small sense of humor but not anything extreme. I prefer to stay out of the decison making but I will help if my help is needed. I hate super hero's and defeat all in my path.
Uniform Description I have black boots that come to my knees that have knives hiddden in the heals. I have black gloves that come to my elbows. I also have a short black dress with silver trim at the bottom of it. I have a silver belt that hangs around my waste and contains throwing knives. I have a black cape the falls down to the back of my knees. My mask is like Kyd Wykkyd's which is simaler to batmans but smaller and doesnt cover my whole head.
Description of powers Wykkyd Wonder's main power is teleportation. The effect can be direct or indirect, as desired, either for teleporting herself and anyone in contact with her, or for creating a hole in any surface by physically touching the material. That and her natural aptitude for stealth make her an expert in sneak attacks. As for offensive capabilities, Wykkyd Wonder's cape is fitted with sharp edges capable of cutting even through massive steel implements. Her other power is to shape shift into a giant black wolf with red eyes. The wolf is super fast and strong.
limitations/Weakness Wykkyd Wonder can Teleport but only as far as a 1 mile raidus. When she creates a whole in the surface it takes what it touches but not her or her brother and only stays open for 5 seconds. Her cape will become useless if wet. She can only shape shift into a wolf in the shadows. Even though the wolf is fast, it can't run at full speed for more then 2 miles. The strength of the wolf comes from being next to her brother. If she is a 1/4 miles away from her brother the strength and speed don't work.
Other things to know- Kyd Wykkyd and Wykkyd Wonder are Twins. When Kyd Wykkyd went off to Hive academy Wykkyd Wonder stayed behind to train herself. While Training and causing mayhem Red X got into her path one day. They fought and that is how the X scar came to be on her hand. The other scars are from him as well. She pulled his mask off and revealed it was robin. He knocked her out and that was how her hate with the Titans started. After the fight with Robin she decided to go join with her brother in jump city. Not knowing if she would find him she did. He was in a group called hive 5. She didn't want to join so she stayed out of there way. But when the broter hood of evil was destroyed and kyd wykkyd was frozen. Wykkyd Wonder stepped in and un froze him. Then they started to work together. Sample RP I stood in the shadows of the Hive and watched as my brother sat on the couch with his "Friends". No one was aware I was here except for him. I teleported out of the Hive and ontop of City hall. I watched as the sun set behind Titan Tower and when all light was gone I teleportated over to the roof of the bank. I telePortated in but stayed in the shadows. 5 guards where guarding the safe. I grabbed 5 throwing knives out of my belt and With a flick of my wrists the five guards fell. I teleportated inside the safe and grabbed what I could carry. My brother teleportated behind me and grabbed what he could carry as well. We teleporated out of the safe and into the lobby of the bank. "Stop right there Kyd Wykkyd and Wykkyd Wonder." We looked up to see the Teen Titan standing in front of us. I dropped the cash and shape shifted into a wolf. My brother drop the cash as well and stood ready to fight. I learched forward at robin and knocked him into the wall. Raven hit me with a desk and I fell on my side. Kyd Wykkyd was attacking starfire but he was hit by one of her starbolts. I ran over to his side and teleporated ontop of the bank. We both teleportated back to the Hive.
Ok this probably sounds super bad. I can write much better but didn't have the time to really work on it sorry. If you want me to re do I can
Last edited by flamearon on Sat Aug 06, 2011 3:43 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
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| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 4:09 am | |
| First off so you can fix this issue right away its not mandatory but you should make some sort of application format that way we can see that you addressed all areas that are required before we can grant character approval. Secondly you can't just say she's like kyd wykkd you must go into detail. Believe it or not not everyone knows who kyd wykkd is here even though it is a teen titans site. So you must make your application like I have no clue who or what your talking about and explain all areas. Unless your character is actually kyd wykkd you must explain her to us entirely powers and all. Not to mention even if you were applying to be kyd wykkd you would have to still explain him to us like we had no clue who youre talking about. That includes explaining powers, personality, history, and if she has equipment etc..
There are examples all over this section of the board of acceptable applications and a format you can use stickyd in a thread located at the top of this section. please post here when you have edited this to be filled with more explanations for your characters attributes. |
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| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 6:59 am | |
| Getting better, much more appeasing then what you had before, but there are still a few issues. Since you want to be related to a canon you have to do a better job on the history because I personally do know of Kyd Wykkyd and I know he was a member of the HIVE. If they were as close as you say please explain in your history what was going on with her while he was in HIVE because as you know we didn't see her at the academy when Cyborg was disguised as stone. I'm curious as to if she was with her parents or visited Kyd Wykkd often or if she was training. Also why is she just now coming to Jump after all this time or maybe she's been here so why is it now she wants to be a a threat/villain to the Titans. (The history could also explain how she received scars just a suggestion)
In addition, I would like you to do a sample RP. Something that gives us a taste of what's to come. In it maybe you can use your powers, give us some of your chars dialogue, and generally let us know what your character is like. It can also be your arrival to Jump City post. Put it under your history.
Finally, I do have an issue with your powers. Powerful they are, but we also do need to have limitations on all our characters. Meaning how fast and strong is the wolf, how far can you teleport, etc... You need to give weaknesses and limits for your character seeing as she isn't a full fledged adult and isn't all powerful. These should or could also coincide with the actual Kyd Wykkyd's weaknesses and limitations since you guys are related and if you can't find any for him just make them up. Also when she opens a hole on any surface does it destroy or remove that surface permanently and could it be used as a form of attack? |
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| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 4:49 pm | |
| Hmm well I should inform you that on this site we don't use any of the Titans from the show. That's because this is the 2nd teen titans RPG. The first was stated to be right after the first 5 grew to old to be titans so new ones took their place and we here are the third gen. of Titans. So Cyborg and Robin are full adults now as well as Starfire. As for your connection to Kyd Wyykyd I'm afraid you can't just have him with you or be in your posts unless you app as him, which would require a lot more writing for that app because we have to make sure you'd use him right. So I dunno how your char's powers are gonna work well if he's never around her???
The weakness section is looking good but on the portal thingy being able to take the surface of what you create it on, that causes a problem if she decides to do it to a person, I mean where would my character even go if she did that and not only that if you make a portal on his stomach you said it sucks it up, butt I assume the rest of him is left which makes for a pretty gruesome death if you ask me...So ya define that. For the speed and strength parts I more so needed to know HOW fast it is and HOW strong it is. Can the wolf tip over a car, a tank, knock down a bank vault what? And can it run at 80 mph, 100 mph, 200 mph?? Finally can he teleport fast enough to dodge bullets and lasers or just arrows?
Finally, there's no HIVE in this RPG because they were broken up by the first 5 titans before they retired, but we could restart them. I dunno if you want to be involved in that or not, but ya you're very close now just fix those last few things and were looking at potential approval here. I dunno if you wanna redo your RP sample now that you know old titans aren't involved in this rpg much? They do make guest appearances sometimes... |
| | | flamearon Newbie
Posts : 4 Join date : 2011-08-06
RPG character Name: Wykkyd Wonder Code Name: Wykkyd Sister Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 6:49 pm | |
| im kinda new at this. But can i ask what app is. and if you do re start the hive five would the same charcters be the same, as in jinx gizmo, kyd wykkyd see-more etc. Because if you did, i would love to be kyd wykkyd. I have RP before on my website. It was warrior cats. It got deleted so havent rp in awhile. | |
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| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 6:53 pm | |
| No it wouldn't be with the same people seeing as they'd be full fledged adults as well, most likely it would be filled with non playable character villains and a few other rolplayer's villains that wanted to join like your Kyd Wykkyd's sister here. However, it's ok to say she's still the age she is now even though he's your twin because we can just say kyd wyykyd was very young back then like around 14 years old. Also app. is an abbreviation for application. So basically app. = application. |
| | | flamearon Newbie
Posts : 4 Join date : 2011-08-06
RPG character Name: Wykkyd Wonder Code Name: Wykkyd Sister Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:09 pm | |
| thanks, and i have this idea. So if they are adults now, could i say that i am kyd wyykyds daughter. I mean, i could still have the same powers i would just change it up a bit so i didn't have to be around him to be stronger. If this is stupid i will try something else. sorry if i am being annoying | |
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| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:18 pm | |
| Hmm well he'd be a young adult around age 19 through 21 lol so if you were his daughter you'd have to be pretty young lol maybe niece would be a better choice or that of a younger sister would be perfect. Which would explain why you couldn't be in HIVE back then because you would've only be like 7 or 8 around that time. No one might've known about you because Kyd Wykkyd doesn't say much and wouldn't of told people about his sibling. But, hey that' just a suggestion it's your character. And no you're not being annoying at all feel free to ask away that's what I'm here for. |
| | | flamearon Newbie
Posts : 4 Join date : 2011-08-06
RPG character Name: Wykkyd Wonder Code Name: Wykkyd Sister Villain or good guy?: Evil
| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:26 pm | |
| i like the younger sister part. so all i need to do is fix up my explainy thing up there right and i would stay the same age right or be younger like a year younger. | |
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| Subject: Re: Wykkyd Wonder (Re-Done)(Re-Done) Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:39 pm | |
| No you can be same age, unless you wanna make her a year younger up to you just make sure to change it from twin to younger sister. |
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